The savor of fruits still remains in my mouth, but the bitterness of words demolishes the clouds and wrings the snow counting the pebbles. But you never told me why you deceived me, why with pain and injustice did you desire to say that the end always in tears is cast to flames.
Beautiful piece with a wild wish of betrayal and pain... I love the imagery. Thanks for sharing Dimitris...
Michael Kwaku Kesse Somuah (Ghana)
07/20/2011
Very nice, very interesting. Congratulations, Dimitris !
Niculina Oprea Bucharest
Niculina Oprea
07/20/2011
Dimitris,
I like you poem very much.
regards, art
artDax
07/20/2011
What tremendous pain and suffering is crossing this poem in witch nevertheless hope must remain in those tears coming close to flames. Thanks Dimitris of share the fine feelings of this poem Ximena
