Mr. Malhotra awsome feelings and deep from your heart. I also share mine but not as touching as your poem.
Miss you
I Miss you dear everyday
Every moment and in every way
You have gone very far away
With you left my happiness and gay
But sure we are not going to fall prey
In the hands of cruel destiny, I pray
God to reunite us some other day
And I believe he never lead us astray
Always I bring to mind the words you say
That “where there is a will, there is a way”
Which boosts my morale and appears a ray
Of hope, soon to ebb away the moments of gray.
B.Madhavi
05/13/2011
Sir, It is indeed a very realistic and true presentation of feelings and thoughts. Unquestionably the poem is a fine commentary on true love and the pangs of loneliness. You have presented a very meaningful and soultouching idea in this poem.
