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Mesmerized

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Mesmerized by her smile,
I started to stutter,
Unable to utter
A word for a while.
Image © GETTY IMAGES

26-Jun-2013

More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1389     Comments: 10

Comments on this Poem

Comment
Welcome, Dear Kulbir Ji and Nathmal Ji,

It was a pleasure to beautify this lovely poem with a lovely picture :-)

alwaysaparna
03-Jul-2013 06:04 AM

Comment Dear Sir, I am highly obliged and want to pay my special thanks to respected Chief Editor Mr.Rajender Krishan Ji ,for extraction of the topic by blessing of
Tulsi krit Ramcharitmanas's chopaies.I want to say his kind notice that I
have already kept my grandson's name "Sachidanand" two years ago,so that I may frequently utter the name of God.Now this debate is fully discussed.
There is no need to discuss any more on it.So a lot of thanks to Rajender
Krishna Ji,Aparna Ji & Kulbir Ji.Thank you very much all of you.Please guide
me time to time.With Regards.

Nathmal Sharma
30-Jun-2013 00:19 AM

Comment Nathmalji and Rajenderji,

Thank you for your heartwarming comments.

Here I am stuttering and you are not at a loss for words!

Let's take a moment to admire her mesmerizing smile, thanks to Aparnaji, before she goes away.

kulbirbhalla
29-Jun-2013 15:57 PM

Comment Tulsidas in Ramcharitmanas says:
---
"Ek Aneeh Aroop Anama
Aj Sachidanand* Pardhama
Vyapak Biswaroop Bhagwana
Tehi Dhari Deh Karat Charit Nana"
----

Sachidanand = Sat + Chit + Anand
= Existence + Knowledge + Bliss - ABSOLUTE.

God Bless the debate!

Rajender Krishan
29-Jun-2013 15:06 PM

Comment I think,there isn't anything in this world except only God & His Maya (Nature).
Kulbir Ji, Now enjoy her smile and be mesmerize till your new poem is not come.Otherwise a beautiful topic will become a serious topic.Thank you for
the subject under discussion.A lot of thanks again for nice effort.

Nathmal Sharma
29-Jun-2013 15:01 PM

Comment Nathmalji,

Thanks for enlightening me. I always love your comments - they can never displease me.

My question is: isn't nature God? Nature is an activity of God - God in manifestation.

kulbirbhalla
29-Jun-2013 14:12 PM

Comment Kulbir Ji, I am not against female era.Actually all the things are done by "prakriti" but not by "purush".He is silent attendant.Birth,marriage,death,work
,power,digestive system,love,talk,eat, drink,sleep,rest,walk,plant,growth and
so many other unnumberable activities are done by "prakriti" or nature in this
world.Everywhere is sovereignty of this "Prakrit"or nature.This world is running by nature.It is base of not only poetry but all other activities of the world which we see or don't see. Without nature the creation, growth and destruction will be stopped. "Jeev" is a fragment of God & enwrapped by "Maya" or "Prakriti" or female particles.Mother,sister,beloved,wife or friend
or any other form of life ,everywhere is "She".Even sages, rishis,munis or other pious souls can't escape from it. Only "jin par Rub di meharbani hei,vohi bachte hein." Excuse me if you felt not good to read my previous comment.My intention was not to hurt you or any female.Sorry .But I always
appreciate your writings and love them.A lot of thanks & grateful to your comment.

Nathmal Sharma
29-Jun-2013 13:01 PM

Comment Rupradhaji and Nathmalji,

Thank you so much for your appreciation.

I'll keep your advise in mind, but ask yourself, without women, who will inspire poetry?


kulbirbhalla
29-Jun-2013 08:57 AM

Comment Her smile is for mesmerized anyone.It's effect can be seen on you as above
lines says,because you couldn't utter even though a word "wow".Every female is "mahamaya" of God which is ready to attract anyone for recreation.
"Aap aik bar madhosh ho gaye,koi bat nahi.par bar-bar aisa ho Jana, muje to
kuchh garbar sa lagata hei."Kulbir Ji, "Hasinaon se bachiye." Aik veer purush
ko shobha nahi deta." I have told too much.Please excuse me.Thanks for nice poem & nice portrait.Be continue to write."You are really a magician of words." A lot of thanks again.

Nathmal Sharma
28-Jun-2013 23:09 PM

Comment mesmerized by your poem.. :-)

rupradha mookerjee
28-Jun-2013 12:59 PM


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