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Theme: Stress

Boiling Point

The boiling milk
Spills all over the kitchen
More work for mother
With the latest arrival
And a jealous older one

23-Jul-2013

More By  :  Padmaja Iyengar-Paddy

Views: 1414     Comments: 7

Comments on this Poem

Comment I like your beautiful humour. I too find humour in all situations.
Great to read your writings. Thanks for making my days colourful and
blooming !!
Vidya Ramani

Vidya Ramani
22-Nov-2013 00:34 AM

Comment Many thanks Rupradha and Kingshuk for liking this one.

Padmaja Iyengar
23-Jul-2013 22:36 PM

Comment very nicely depicted..

Rupradha
23-Jul-2013 10:33 AM

Comment very nice..

Rupradha
23-Jul-2013 10:17 AM

Comment I have only a son. This is just a flight of imagination to write a Tanka. I'm glad this one took you down the memory lane, Mr. Nair :-)

Padmaja Iyengar
23-Jul-2013 08:53 AM

Comment I can visualize the stress.....so nicely portrayed!

kingshuk
23-Jul-2013 08:33 AM

Comment I remember my two daughters. The elder one was very jealous when the second arrived. Good days to remember. Thanks Padmaja-ji. What prompted you to write this?

madathilnair
23-Jul-2013 05:35 AM


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