Humility

by Pili Pubul

Humility
Should Rule

Our souls

So clarity
will shine.

Arrogance

Only blinds.

Mind always
Wanting to be
First

Kindness ignored

Self respect
Dies

On the way.

07-Sep-2013

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you so much Rupradha, Madhavi and Padmaja for your great comments.

pilipubul
11-Sep-2013 12:21 PM

amazing!!

Rupradha
11-Sep-2013 06:22 AM

Arrogance
Only blinds.
Mind always
Wanting to be
First

Very meaningful lines that amplifies the supremacy of ego over all else...Much appreciate the concept and presentation, dear
pilipubul. Well done. Thanks for sharing.

Padmaja Iyengar
11-Sep-2013 05:44 AM

Thank you for a nice poem.

Madhavi
08-Sep-2013 14:24 PM

My appreciation for your wonderful comment , thank you so much
Mohini.

pilipubul
08-Sep-2013 14:13 PM

Wonderfully expressed. Congrats ! Great to see your poem got selected as editor's choice. Keep it up . looking forward for more poems from you . Best wishes.

Mohini Gurav
08-Sep-2013 13:39 PM

Thank you so very much Madathil.

pilipubul
08-Sep-2013 09:26 AM

Your comment is so good that humbles me. Thank you so much Nathmal. I was unaware that was Editor choice. Thank you.

pilipubul
08-Sep-2013 09:23 AM

Modesty or humility is necessary for a good life.It opens the door of worldly
success,while as arrogance restrains the paths of progress & opportunities.
Even God likes our humility than arrogance.Those who have humbleness,
will enter into the God's state or Heaven after this life.You have described
here humility,arrogance & kindness so well that the poem has become a part
of editor's choice.A lot of thanks,Mam.Thank you very much.

Nathmal Sharma
08-Sep-2013 09:00 AM

GOOD AND SIMPLE. GREAT TRUTH.

Madathil Rajendran Nair
08-Sep-2013 07:27 AM