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Theme: Helpless

Her Eyes



My heart drowns into the ocean
Mind at shore helplessly lies...
Awaits an imminent implosion
I’ve seen her beautiful
dark eyes.

30-Oct-2013

More By  :  Kingshuk Chakraborty

Views: 1392     Comments: 6

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Welcome, Kingshuk

Nice to know you liked the Photo :-)

Yes, I can relate to you as it happens with me too.

Sometimes, some images conjure up some verses in my mind.

alwaysaparna
06-Nov-2013 07:46 AM

Comment Thank you, Priscilla...........invite you to read Boloji and you would see more.

kingshuk
06-Nov-2013 06:44 AM

Comment King, you were always a poetic type but had never experienced your piece. nice one.

Priscilla Koirala
01-Nov-2013 07:55 AM

Comment Rupradhaji, Do not know much about the readers but truly your words gave me the feeling of touching the sky.....thank you so much!

Padmaja, thanks for the ever encouraging words!

Aparna Ji, as always loved the image you added. Must let you know that the thought of writing this poem came from the image you added in Rupradhaji's beautiful poem "Floods"......my gratitude!

kingshuk
31-Oct-2013 01:00 AM

Comment Superbly crafted! And so romantic too!

Padmaja Iyengar
30-Oct-2013 14:26 PM

Comment mind blowing..readers' hearts will be drowned into the ocean of your words..

Rupradha
30-Oct-2013 09:55 AM


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