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Theme: Relationship

Indifference

Continuous
Indifference
Of a loved one
Is akin to a slow
And deadly poison

It kills slowly
But painfully
Draining out life's
Energy, cheerfulness
Splendour and shine.

19-Jun-2014

More By  : Dr. Jaipal Singh

Views: 1401     Comments: 8

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thank you.

jairathore
21-Jun-2014 01:04 AM

Comment Very true, well said.

Anugrah
21-Jun-2014 00:54 AM

Comment Thanks for compliments, Nathmal Ji.

jairathore
20-Jun-2014 12:49 PM

Comment Thank you, Rupradhaji.

jairathore
20-Jun-2014 12:48 PM

Comment Good thought.Nice expression. Thanks a lot Jaipal Singh Ji.

Nathmal Sharma
20-Jun-2014 11:46 AM

Comment so true..very well-written..

Rupradha
20-Jun-2014 11:16 AM

Comment Thank you, Padmajaji, but this makes you mentally tough and endurable.

jairathore
20-Jun-2014 06:01 AM

Comment Indifference especially from a loved one, is the worst punishment and mental torment. Very well expressed, Jaipal ji. Thanks for sharing.

Padmaja Iyengar
19-Jun-2014 08:27 AM


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