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Theme: Relationship

Some Relationships

Not a step fully in
Not a step fully out
Neither midway path
Often tight-rope walk
 
Speak if spoken to
Each word weighed
Carefully considered
Eye contacts avoided
 
Smiles are out
Lips pursed
Better zipped
Eyes downcast
 
Mind scared to think
Heart scared to beat
Eyes scared to see
Tongue tied in knots
 
Shadowy existence
Living out a curse
Moving in mimes
Communication terse
 
Tension mounts
Blood pressure shoots
Pulse rate races
Silence deafens
 
Pressure cooker whistles
And lets out steam....

23-Jul-2014

More By  :  Padmaja Iyengar-Paddy

Views: 1385     Comments: 8

Comments on this Poem

Comment Many thanks Nathmalji, for your appreciation.

Padmaja Iyengar
27-Jul-2014 18:18 PM

Comment Good views about human nature.You are properly acquainted with life phenomena.Thank you Mam.

Nathmal Sharma
27-Jul-2014 10:16 AM

Comment Thanks Ru for that liking this one and your appreciation.

Padmaja Iyengar
24-Jul-2014 10:10 AM

Comment very innovative style, so well-written Paddy..hats off..

Rupradha
24-Jul-2014 03:01 AM

Comment Thank you all Bhaskarji, Swatantara and Kulbir for your generous praise.

Padmaja Iyengar
23-Jul-2014 12:33 PM

Comment wonderful !!! excellent as usual..

bhaskaranandjhabhaskar
23-Jul-2014 10:15 AM

Comment Such sensitive portrayal of relations that drain the life out of you....a curse indeed they are....

swatantra
23-Jul-2014 08:55 AM

Comment Padmaja,

Creative!

You are a good observer of the human scene!

Kulbir
23-Jul-2014 07:47 AM


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