Theme: Death

Awakened to New Life

A soothing glimpse
As You are
For the dozy eyes,
I rise up
From deep slumber
Of the mundane world.

Worn and torn in life,
I fall asleep at last
Clasped 
Into Your arms
Stretched far and wide
For an eternity,
Thence... 
Into Your heart,
Widespread 
Eternally embossed
With true peace and bliss -
I am awakened to New Life..!

11-Sep-2014

More By  :  Bhaskaranand Jha Bhaskar

Views: 1381     Comments: 2

Comments on this Poem

Comment "...The philosophic and symbolic style is praiseworthy because, death , here is the starting point of spiritual journey or death is the mother of spiritual and divine incarnation. . Just as the lines describe "i rise up . . .mundane world. The deep slumber is the worldly life . When a soul leaves a body that is called death. . Than its journey to embrace or its mix up with god starts so it get eternal peace and bliss. . And the lines " i fall asleep . . . Wide spread " reminds me the lines by R. Browning "O thou soul of my soul ! I shall clasp thee again. And with God be the rest". In Hindi philosophy it is said " jal me kumbh kunbh me jal hai , bahar bheetar pani . Futa kumbh jal jalhi samaanaa yeh tath katho giyani". . . Words are less but meaning is too wide ...."--- Durga Patva, UP

bhaskaranandjhabhaskar
20-Sep-2014 14:05 PM

Comment "..Eternity of the skill of expression and transformation to words
composition and again the extract of its heartiest magnetism towards love and creation very imperative.
Arisenment awakening of individualism and its appeasement through words ignite the soul affect the throat as a mark of exclamation.
I love and enjoy your creation through pen.
In this materialistic edge where emotios are also saleable you dare to expose the physical membrane and substantiate your blissful courage to eruptify the feelings in your lines very commendable. I like and appreciate you for amalgamating the love and eternity into astheism . Continue your creativity."
---- Ashok Karn, Bokaro

bhaskaranandjhabhaskar
20-Sep-2014 14:04 PM


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