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Theme: Life

Something Amiss



A blank corner
In my life’s album
With something amiss
Still laughs at me…

My life spans
On such a big canvas
If something is amiss -
How does it matter?

But sometimes in life
Even one soul’s absence
Leaves such a vacuum
That it cannot be filled
With the arrival and stay
Of thousands of persons…

12-Jun-2016

More By  : Dr. Jaipal Singh

Views: 1381     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment
Welcome, Jaipal Ji

alwaysaparna
20-Jun-2016 06:51 AM

Comment Thank you, Aparna Ji, for editorial contribution, making it to Editor's Choice and commensurate image

jairathore
14-Jun-2016 06:47 AM

Comment thank you, Kulbirji. I'm glad you agree.

jairathore
13-Jun-2016 23:25 PM

Comment Jaipal Sahib,

What you say is so true.

Thanks for sharing.

Kulbir
13-Jun-2016 07:59 AM


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