My Love Became A Drooping Rose

by Rupradha Mookerjee

My love became a drooping rose
Ever since it lost your care,
Like the flakes of snow it froze
As it knew you weren’t there.

My love became a drooping rose
And made me bleed, you see,
When two different ways our fate chose
And destiny parted you from me.

My love became a drooping rose
When you left me all alone,
The chapter of love had to close
And it became a mourning bygone!

31-Mar-2011

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Comments on this Poem

@Rani Ji: Thanks a ton!

Rupradha
09-Apr-2011 03:53 AM

Thank you so much Ravinder Ji!!

rupradhamookerjee
09-Apr-2011 03:35 AM

Short, sweet and telling. That's what poetry is all about. Good

Ravinder Malhotra
09-Apr-2011 02:34 AM

Very lovely lines, graceful and poignant. Thanks.

Rani
02-Apr-2011 17:09 PM

@Mallick Sir: thanks a lot for the motivation you gift me every time I am down!!

rupradhamookerjee
01-Apr-2011 13:43 PM

Rupradha, let not sorrow and grief overpower you, may you bloom as a lotus at dawn; and may he come riding the glowing golden chariot. PLease look up, and not look down...

kumarendramallick
01-Apr-2011 12:40 PM