If I Say

by Dr. Kumarendra Mallick

If I say, 'I love you,
what will be your reply,
will you blush
or will you spill a smile?'

If I say, 'Give me a kiss,
what will be your reply?
Eyes closed will you close in
or feel shy and blow one from a mile?'

If I ask, 'Fill up the blanks...
what will be your script?
Will you make me 'spellbound' -
sans any blanks between our hearts

Love is the fin in the sea
and feather in the sky,
heart's rapid breath
and lover's fervent tearful eye...

07-Apr-2011

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you, Amit for your candsid words.

Kumarendra Mallick
16-Sep-2011 09:04 AM

This poem is fantastic... I loved it.

Amit
16-Sep-2011 03:51 AM

Rupradha, you have, in fact, made me spellbound by removing the blank spaces. Thank you for your inspiring words.

kumarendramallick
08-Apr-2011 06:42 AM

I am spellbound! Your writing is awesome!!

Rupradha
08-Apr-2011 06:36 AM