Sep 25, 2023
Sep 25, 2023
Compassion, Delicacy, Devotion and Femininity
Eko rasah karuna yeva -Bhavabhuti
In the process of writing
I am ahead of myself always
And there’s no look back
The rest of the time
I am stalking myself
And there’s no looking ahead
The issue is
That of keeping pace. (Sukrita)
Sukrita, born in Kenya and travelled to and fro Mugabe and Mumbai, saw and experienced a lot removed far from the shores. The addition to her collection Untitled at the end of the book speaks of her varied accomplishments and distinguishing qualities. Daughter of reputed writer/painter herself, Sukrita took to academics, poetry and painting as a duck takes to water – not a cliché here. Reading her poetry needs our hearts in the right place. To put it in other words, it is like glancing at the sea where the shore is nowhere in sight – wondering at the ebb and the tide.
To begin with Unititled, the title, needs no title since it is a communication of the pulsations in the heart and brain, deep, captivating and more importantly path-breaking. Her poetry is inward-looking, searching for the shores, looking up at the sky and losing one’s self in thought. Thanks to her educational and other various qualifications, she has penning experience which included the paint and brush too. She worked and participated in literary festivals in India and abroad. She is recognized and worked in literary organizations like ICCR, Sahitya Akademi, Bharathiya Jnaanpith, Poetry Society of India and some universities also.
Unititled is her collection of poems which was published first in 2014 and a little later Ink and Line, another collection with painting and poems in the same year. The publishing house Vani published her Dream Catcher along with slender little one of the title Behind the Poems first in 2014 and later reissued in 2016.
‘The Art of Wearing Bangles’ is the first poem. There is a connection between the art of writing poetry and loving and wearing bangles. Both have significance and finesse. Pleasure and a symbol of pride and satisfaction are all there in wearing bangles. Here is what the poet has in her mind:
The blank page bears words
With the fondness and patience
Of girls wearing glass bangles
One by one, carefully and gently
... ... ... ...
They are not to dangle lose and wide
Or remain too close and feel the skin
Let them take over the throb
Jingle in glee, glide into action
Tune in to the dance
of a poem
on the page. (p.11)
The other poet Sarojini Naidu, the Nightingale of India wrote about bangle sellers. But here is the poet singing about jingle and glee.
The words in the poem have to come in like breathing in life. They gallop too like a trained horse which cajoles the rider with enthusiasm. The poet suggests to the writer to get on to the saddle and reach out to those ‘still’ words that fly the rock of silence which lies in wait. One has to soar high and higher:
From the black holes
Of the universes, seen and unseen,
Through meteor storms and
The hand has to appear pointing
That way (How to Begin, p.14)
Conceiving and delivering a poem is one great act of enlightenment, a matter of delicacy.
The poet sees in Aurangabad, a place of worship, Sulibhajan Temple. Temples are the sacred gifts of a person who gave to man the soul-elevating contemplation called tapas. The poet pays a tribute to the seer:
The sacred gift of
... .... ... ....
Here, in complete isolation
Dogs and stones create
Fellowship in suffering and joy... (pp, 15-16)
The poet has many an arrow and many a bar in her flowery quiver of enlightenment, wisdom and the peace that passes understanding.
Ideas, feelings, emotions, compassion and ardrata, get mixed up raising treasure troves for the poet and through her the understanding and appreciative reader – from Vasco de Gama, Quit India, Spices and pepper, along with tales hidden in layers and layers one over the other, lower and lower and higher and higher. There is glory in the poem ‘Liberation at ‘Kappad, Calicut’ Kozhikode if you please.
Each wave on this beach
Brings a throb from the
Heart of the Indian Ocean
Sighs from history
... .... .....
Layers on layers
Bleeding on the sands and
Washing away at once. (pp18-19)
The poet was the guest editor of a poetry session on the University of Hawaii and the poem ‘Ambers in the Pacific’ is about the mythology of their islands: M?ui, the ancient chief is the culture hero who appears in many genologues. Kumulipo is the son of Akalana and his wife Hina. M?ui is cognate with M?ui, the Hawaiian island. The poem refers to the myths which make enticing reading. (It is interesting to note that this poet guest edited Crossing Over a special issue of a journal Manoa of the University of Hawaii in the U.S.)
Islands with white shores
Combating tiger waves
Islands held in Kumulipo
The Creation chant
In multiple rainbows
That Hina climbed
To reach the moon
When the moon is full
They see her
In the tides that rise
They hear her
In the rumbling belly
Of the dormant volcano.
Mauna Kea . . . (Ambers on the Pacific, pp. 20-21)
The poet is fond of mythology, folklore and belief. ‘The Strange Gift of Sharad Poornima’ is about Hindu feeling and belief. The poem describes both
From the centre of the earth
It rose as a streak of lightning
And entered the soles of my feet
.... ... ....
The bright ray of the sun
Pierced the dark clouds
Broke open my head
Settling in the cage
Whiffs of reason and logic
Filling the cranium
Stretched in anguish as if
In search of madness ... (p.23)
Himachal, Kashmir, Valley of Flowers, Line of Actual Control are described in a poem with a clear imaginative, poetic vision. In ‘Out of the Box’ another world was seen beyond stars.
That this world has worlds
beyond the stars
I did not know.
... ... ...
Bits of truth buried
in the graveyard of words
rose as if from the vaults
in the bottom of the sea
lighting the dark shores of life.(pp.24-25)
‘Meta Cacophony’ is a poem about words and their myriad powers, effects and meanings.
Words are weapons
Hurled to hurt, to cause pain
Even to kill
Over and over again.
..... ..... .
Words are winged tools
flying and merging
into the black hole of silence
deep in the centre of our galaxy. (pp26-27)
A poet has mastery over words. Only poets know how best to use what words at what time. The nature and quality of words are multitudinous and not many are cacophonous.
Good poetry lends itself to interpretation and explanation and leaves many things only to the ability of the reader to understand. Sukrita is of the stature of great poets. ‘Mountain Nights’ is about fear, dreams and feelings of anxiety and even a kind of neurotic outburst. It is surrealistic, at times
The big thud on the roof
That cracked the rocky silence
Of sleep day after day
Was that of a flying fox
with wings that do not
carry its weight into the firmament
Not combat mountain fog. (pp.28)
There is horror, real horror, in human acts in ‘The Hazara Poem’. Screams of Hazara captives sold as slaves in 1893 in Afghanistan brought the following idea:
Birthing and dying sounds
incubating and gestating
babies born in anguish
and the emerging poems
paving the way
the dreams of homing...(p29)
The poet is an intellectual, a spiritualist, and essentially a woman and she goes on citing instances of the fiendish behaviour of inhuman demons.
‘The Myth of Recreation’ is again about horror. There is reference to Columbus landing on the shores. A series of references to horror take us to the devilish human cruelty.
Every inch savagely cultivated
Beauty a metaphor of atrocity
Moments of joy
Pumped from the lungs on ventilators
Men and women in love
their hearts beating on pace makers (p30)
Mithila, the land of Janaki, the Ganga, Patna and raising questions with images and metaphors are here in the journey by team boat into the throbbing heart of Bihar. The poet goes fast deep inside the sloughs and scales the peaks too and the more the reader reads her poems the more the vastness increases filling his heart.
The idiom and the turn of expression become unique when compassion and kindness bring out the feeling of basic humanism. ‘What am I to her and she to me’ talks of the growth of intimacy and relationship. In ‘Seven moons away is when I met her’ – see the expression moon – not a day in travel. The speaker of the poem sends up a prayer:
I hear, you are from Delhi
-the city of power-
get me shelter
get me food and clothes...(p.32)
and then this happy ending:
what has woven those threads between us,
do our ancestors awaken each full moon
to connect us
she calls me and I rise to walk tiptoe
on the rays of light
and embrace her. (p33)
Many tales, many feelings and many experiences are told and retold in many languages described in the Folk Lore Society of London. The fast shifting scenes, the men and women and their languages are evocative in the poem ‘A Tale Untold’.
Some of the poems take a little time and careful study to understand and appreciate. Here is the sum and substance of Sukrita’s thought in her poem ‘Where Shall I Write’. I quote the poem in full:
Where shall I write
the paper twists in pain
all space is in awkward crinkles
Where shall I paint
The canvas fills
with sighs and whispers
As I lift those brushes
I carry the cross
Unborn poems, aborted paintings
Nor dead (p.48)
There are very small poems that display her mindset which I must include in full to do justice to the very unique poet who called them ‘Some Little Ones’
Terror struck bees
Buzzing in harnets
shooting out of black clouds (Some Little Ones, p.57)
Through the stillness
of my walk
The forest dancing
in foggy silence(p.59)
A scream shooting through
the eye of the needle
What glorious thoughts and how well expressed! Melting, white, peace are key words for a galaxy of thinking.
Sukrita’s paintings like her poems need quite long spells of time to look deep to take a glimpse of her personality. The best way to peep into her mind is to spend hours looking at the paintings and guessing the nuances of her imagination. Eliot’s Wasteland had to wait for exegetes to lift the curtains of the poet’s thinking. Sukrita’s many poems need exegesis. This poet is enchanting when understood with her references and dedication to the great women saints, Lal Ded (Kasmiri Shiva Yogini), Akka Mahadevi (of Kannada desa) and Andal of Thiruppavai in Tamil.
Painting and Poetry going together hand in hand is the latest addition of another genre of imaginative creativity and ebullient enthusiasm. A few moths I came across a volume of poetry and painting by poet Preeta Chandran and painter Saxena Pankaj Kapur.(Book Review of ‘The Painted Verse’, ‘Brave and Brilliant Beginning’ published on Jan 24, 2016.) The creation ‘Ink and Line’ is the creation of painter Sonnet Mondal and poet Sukrita. To call it a handiwork is a travesty of justice, if not a farrago of nonsense - remembering Shakespeare. This book is published by Authorspress, New Delhi, in 2014. The blurb makes it very clear that the paintings do not illustrate the poems, nor do the poems describe the paintings. The readers are told brusquely in the blub: We form clusters in mind and move; perhaps one among the crowd will find the point in the ring for us to flee tangentially.
One can declare this collection sixteen to the power of sixteen – paintings illumining the poems and poems going up in power or even the other way round as per one’s own preferences. There are sixteen paintings of Sukrita on the left and sixteen sonnets of the renowned poet Sonnet Modal. Neither the paintings nor the poems are titled – perhaps leaving that to the reader’s own idea and taste. Sonnet Mondal needs a little introduction to new readers of poetry. Mondal is the founder of the Enchanting Verses Literary Review, Pismatic Celluloid and Diorama of Three Diaries published by Authorspress, New Delhi. Sparrow Publication brought out his ‘21 Line Fusion Sonnets of 21st Century’ and sic other publications are also there. Among other things he is enlisted as the First Indian writer to write a new type of sonnet poetry. Mandal is known by the name of Sonnet, his poetic form.
For fear of running the risk of prolixity, this article confines itself only to two poems carried on the right and two paintings carried on the left. Though the poems are not titled the reader may take a look at the titles chosen by this writer. Possibly, the first poem may be titled ‘The Saintly Face’.
The speaker of the sonnet says this:
The saintly face will be recalled
when atheists come nodding
their belief-less heads in accord
with slokas, laid down eternally
in scriptures, engraved by sages;
Their sacrifice for the survival
of faith stretches flaccidly
as the wrinkles of my old face.
They will discard flags of innate
egos, flowing down through rivers,
melting from a squeezing protest
against harmless Gods, smiling off
the spring of my face, with this beard,
lying like a nest of new birth.(p.17)
The speaker is a decrepit old person. He is intensely humane. He speaks of faith and genuine belief of real religion. Scriptures talked of as slokas are of times by gone with the pith and marrow of real wisdom run out or evaporated. Stone edicts only show the remains of letters and cannot instil the spirit of religion which is only faith. The word ‘flaccid’ is chosen with poetic imaginative, vision. Sages engraved words but the stone hearts do not digest them. Flaccidity is shown on wrinkled face. Naturally wrinkles are the effect of discarding, throwing away, or erasing ahambava, feeling of ‘myness’. It is natural that in ripe old age the feeling of myness is thrown off. But this requires faith which is a form of deep understanding. Heartless are people with hearts turned stony. They are not godly. The long beard flowing down is indicative of maturation shown in the painting. Serenity and wisdom (real old age) make one realize that letters on edicts on stone alone are not real belief in goodness alone which gives one the peace that passes understanding.
The painting shows this visually and the poet conveys what the painter had in mind. It is understanding and goodness that should be the qualities of the really grownups, the old ones. The old man in the paintings is respected. The ‘they’ in the poem throw away their egos, their protests against Gods (gods are harmless – doing on the best to be done, doing only good). The picture can be taken as an illustration of what the poet had in his mind about the saintly face.
Any way the blurb has already said that poem and the painting are autonomous. There may or may not be any one to one relationship between the two. Here is another painting.
The possible title for this sonnet could be ‘Search Endless’
We have lost ourselves to the rush,
to the word ‘futility’ and
all those social building blocks which
lie bearing a facade to
derail a normal going life
into a never ending ring,
leaving a zero, for us to
be realised at the dead end.
Still we run from daybreak to dusk.
Our whims are stronger than failure.
We form clusters in mind and move;
Perhaps one among the crowd
will find the point in the ring
for us to flee tangentially. (p.39)
It is a large group of people bundled together. The group is in search. Futility of the building blocks which are a facade and derail normal going life. The never ending ring only leaves a zero. There is nothing seen at the top, the end of the ring. Only there is a dead end. Even then the group goes on running from dawn to dusk. The group realizes that their whims are stronger than failure and hence they huddle forming clusters in mind and go on moving. Still there is a hope. Perhaps one in the group will find a point for all of them to flee tangentially. This is only one way of seeing the painting or understanding the poem. Readers are kings.
Sukrita published her ‘Dream Catcher’ first in 2014 in two volumes, one in the normal 1/8 demi size and the other ‘Behind the Poems - Dream Catcher’ in the fancy 1/16 size. She wrote in the first book “Poet as Dream Catcher’ the meaning of the title and revealed her idea and its purpose. The Obijwe, natives of North America and their Midewiwin Society, are respected as the keeper of scrolls of events, oral history, songs, stories and memories etc. They believed that the dreams we have while we sleep, are sent by sacred spirits as messages. According to their belief in the centre of the Dream Catcher there is a hole. Good dreams are permitted to reach the sleeper through this hole in the web. As for the bad dreams, the web traps them and they disappear at dawn with the first light. For some, they try to determine what messages are being passed on to them and what the message represents. The poet states that the poems came from her sojourn in China etc are ‘sieved’ from her memory of some odd dream-like reality. Published first in 2014 and later issued again in 2016, the books reveal a lot of the poet’s mindscape and her ability to scale and stay at the heights of creative imagination.
Faith leads to devotion and compassion leads to femininity. All the four are closely related. In ‘Dream Catcher’ we see seven paintings and read forty poems. Some have titles and some don’t. Poems in Tsunami Snap Shots are not titled and they are very short and very telling.
‘The Woman with a Baby’ is about Nature, a mother’s feeling. There is a mention of many nations but the basic insight is just the same.
Tiny movements rising
in our bellies,
fish churning the ocean,
birds flapping wings in the skies
and eyelids, drooping and batting heavy,
or exist the bliss of sleep. (p12)
For one immersed in the study of nature China, and Tai Chi are places among many. ‘Tai Chi’ has this for the reader to think about:
High strung and pulled to the
Roots in the eyes of the other
Stillness finely balanced
On the thread of their version. (p.13)
‘Heights’ is a very brief but very intensely imagined reality;
The Seventh floor
Tells Buddha’s tale
Above desire, above suffering
One day I was born
One day I shall die, (p.15)
Mother’ touch is incomparable – it is divine. In ‘The Mad Woman on the Avenue of Stars’, the Chinese woman is viewed thus in the poet’s mindscape:
Giggling and breaking into
And vales twinkling
The old woman tearing her hair
Squealing in Cantonese glee
clearing cobwebs of silence
that masks multitudes
amidst din of stars. (pp.20-21)
Only an extraordinary poet can write the last three lines.
There are twelve snaps in ‘Tsunami Snapshots’. In ‘The Chinese Cemetery’ this is about a child’s exit:
In The World of Suzie Wong
Consumed the baby,
And then lapped up
-the letter of introduction-
“To whom-so-ever it may concern:
Flames are messengers
Carrying the known
To the unknown
Life afterlife. (p.23)
The grimness sends shivers down our spines.
‘Tsunami Snapshots’ are brief heart rending sighs, not mere poems without titles:
When the waves
relented and brought
the baby back on
snakes took over
and created a lap
to keep death
out of boundaries. (25)
There is another snapshot, if it just that one:
The dog is
Dragging the child
Out of tsunami thunder
Licking the wounds
And restoring sanity in nature.
But that dog is
and let others perish. (p.27)
The devastation and the horror are maddening.
The sea is called Kadalamma, Mother Sea, kadali is sea and amma is mother, in Telugu. The cataclysm and catastrophe were hell bent on devouring all and everything;
But today the sea
Swallowed her children
Her womb bleeding
Kadalama had betrayed
Her trust. (p.33)
‘New Life’ explains tsunami, the Japanese word:
With the first cry
Of the baby,
They named her
‘End from the Beginning’ is about Mohammed bin Tughlaq who remains in wilderness and jungle books. There is the poem ‘Tughlak’ where we read this:
.... ..... ...
His steps measured and heavy
The ocean of meaning
where sanity drowns
Triumphs. (pp 45-46)
The drawings in this book are of varied numbers, perhaps of sari pallus. There are twelve poems on snow in ‘Winter Poems at Minnesota’ in their various avatars.
Black snow on the road
as the white night
At full moon
Snowflakes in mid air
Looking for the ground
To settle or
Melt away. (p.53)
This poem is subtly suggestive
on the white streets
of the white continent. (p.57)
Then this is the state of penguins
Hold their babies
in their body folds
through months of
Power over the universe. (p.62)
The poet describes how the Dream Catcher holds her under its power. Just a few bits for a sample:
Each time I came home with a bagful
That drip through the day
For me and all
I wait for a new dawn. (p.65)
‘In Corpses’ dedicated to Kavita Karkare the poet mourns pitifully:
You stood still
By the side of the
of your husband
More dead than he (p.66)
Of the mourning over various holocausts in Partition, Gujarat etc there is this question
Can language combat reality,
Rid one of
‘My Lost Diary’ written in words in which the alphabet soaked heavy with phantoms and angels there is this:
At war with the whole world
And with self
Stuck in the sticky cobwebs here (p.73)
The last section is adorned with the painting of a six piece pallu, if it is that really. The first poem in this section is ‘The Chosen One’. It is about monkeys and chestnut trees:
Roots in knots
The tree barren
Is silhouette in moon light
Has monkeys in it
between their teeth. (p.88)
The poet has a special knack of looking around and within and beyond the situations and happening in the world with men and women seeing what they are. Sukrita’s poems live long being remembered by soft and tenderly sensitive minds. One last word about the little book ‘Behind Poems – Dream Catcher’. This may be taken as the poet’s apologia pro vita sua. Here are a few of her statements in ‘Other’ and ‘I’:
‘The blank sheet stares back at me in defiance each time I sit to write a poem.’ ‘Other’ (p.8)
‘I urge all words to vanish into their sounds and merge into the total experience of the poem’. ‘Other’ (p.11)
‘Often have I wondered why I did not write a poem about my intense relationship with my grandmother; why did I write the story, ‘Visitation’, instead? ‘I’ (p.38)
And then, finally, she wrote the poem ‘Connections’– which can be termed ne plus ultra - on her granny starting thus:
Thank you, amma
for the moon, thank you. (p.39)
More by : Dr. Rama Rao Vadapalli V.B.
Thanks Rama Rao Sir for giving an elaborate review on such an accomplished poet and her works in a most convincing way.
Not only a review but an exhaustive treatment, penetrative and
sensitive, so revealing. Thanks you Dr Sahib.