Theme: Love

Eternal Happiness

by Rupradha Mookerjee
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I was quiet even in the throng,
Something was surely wrong,
I missed you baby, like hell,
Still couldn’t send you a mail,
I became a drooping rose,
Without you my veins froze,
Often my eyes used to be wet,
Couldn’t believe in my fate,
Thought I would never smile again,
Till you took away all my pain.


Baby, your single call,
Could bring it all,
I smiled with the same grace,
Without you my life was a mess,
I am back to life at present,
You made my world so pleasant,
I am now filled with sassiness,
You’ve become my eternal happiness,
With every passing year I love you more,
Never loved anybody so much before!

16-Apr-2012

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Comments on this Poem

Comment Reappearance of your poems shows the richness of your poetry.Really your poems have some special qualities. I can't describe . Howmuch people liked them,you can easily imagine it.Thank you so much for your love poems & salute to your penance of love.

Nathmal Sharma
16-May-2013 09:21 AM

Comment Thanks a lot Kumarendra Ji. "I missed you baby, like hell" means "I terribly missed you"..I would like to keep it as it is. Thanks again.

rupradhamookerjee
25-Apr-2012 15:14 PM

Comment I am happy with your poem with a strong longing and yearning. The composition is good, except one word 'hell'. Please find an alternate word. Love and thank you.

Kumarendra Mallick
24-Apr-2012 23:12 PM

Comment thanks a lot Prof & Kanchan Ji!!

rupradhamookerjee
24-Apr-2012 10:14 AM

Comment Yearning and the rewards of yearning are both beautiful!

Kanchan Bhattacharya
17-Apr-2012 04:25 AM

Comment
Wow! Wonderful !

You’ve become my eternal happiness,
With every passing year I love you more,
Never loved anybody so much before!

These lines carry everything in your heart.

flame
16-Apr-2012 09:55 AM


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