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Worldly love aspect turns into universal love at last.No one knows the definition of love.It is said,
sabse unchi prem sagai.Prem ke bas Arjuna rath
hankyo,bhul gaye thkurai.Sabse unchi prem sagai."
Sir,you have created a physical aspect of love trans forming into a state of spiritual love.What a nice
attitude of you,Sir ! A lot of thanks.Off the hat,Sir.
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"Duality
becoming One
merging into Absolute
A state of perfection
When
except Love
everything ceases. "- beautiful really.
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I can also smell a trace of Khalil Jibran there in this.
Daniel.
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Your poem reminds me so much of John Donne ,the famous metaphysical poet of England.He also has infused the otherwise tabooed topic with Divinity and has achieved immortality in the process.
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Excellent poem. The last para to me sounded Bang Bang Bang when I read it aloud.
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This one was sublime! Really liked it
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Awesome!!! Amazingly well-portrayed in these words-
When
except Love
everything ceases....
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Thank you all for your reflective comments.
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oneness emerges after sex ceases
lust whispers into ecstasy
tempers soar high but remains..
union of souls into oneness..
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Fantastic poem!
These lines are sublime :
A moment
that dissolves
the subjective "I"; and
the objective "You"
And gets defined as
Shunya.
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wonderful sir. it is MOXA which is given in our darshan..when the diffrence of subject n object disapeare...it is Nirvaan.
beautiful poem .. age of Samadhi.
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@Pavalamani Pragasam
Agree with you! It's really a clean treatment of the subject..! Nice poem, indeed!
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Superbly carved sculpture,sir.Best.
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Love being Truth shall Prevail. Even in Wars unleashed by Loveless people, Love Persists. For some dash of humour however we may describe Love as two consonants, two vowels and two fools. Wise men write on Love. Keep writing.
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Words are really a powerful media to express the unspoken feelings of mind, body...Meaningful in many ways
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Really.....its Soaked with sensation.....great creation.
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A fusion of positive and negative energies into absolute- Nicely described.
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Nice poem....the truth is if minds mate first and bodies later, it becomes a wonderful relationship. But sadly if bodies first but the minds later, then it is just the opposite.
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Only connotation of this word which a narrow pervert mind seems to know and understand has been exploded by Rajenderji in this pithy poem with deep spiritual overtones.
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Hearty congratulations. There is perceptible ascent of blossoming consciousness.
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Advaitvad of Shrimad Vallabhachary leads us to absoluteness which a state of perfection. When in Love with Shri Krishna,
every thing ceases; soul goes to eternity never finding end but
meeting shunya that persists. Love is beautiful that is truth
which never dies - lasts for ever. When lovers meet, 'I' and
'You' melt into oneness, eko aham. beyond every thing.
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your line of thought is akin to Sahajiya philosophy (also in Tantra). What I like is the resemblance with Charyapada. Writes poet Kanhupada -
"The mind is the boatman in a Great Void./
Kanhu goes for Union with Great Happiness."
Again -
"The senses are won over./
Great Bliss becomes king of the Void."
All our wisdom is bound to lead to that Blissful Shunyata.
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lovely, poem...youthful and full of now
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woow....
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Excellent Poem, Dada
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Suberb!
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Nice.....
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Well, this attempts perfection like a Tantrik but leaves a doubt- that love - is it making love or the whole thing is beyond love? the picture does not suggest so-
besides these dilemma, the poem is philosophic, pure and beyond the mundane-
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You are as good poet as photographer. Congratulations.
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Well spun poem! Written cleanly on a topic thought to be taboo!
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Best panacea for all problems!
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A poem of deep significance, from sex to superconsciousness.
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A very sensuous poem dabbed with passion
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Oh my God! The bold title gave me a jolt and I gasped in awe! But a very true, clean treatment of the subject! lol! Something I think of as differentiating duvaitham and advaitham in vedanta!
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