Comments on this Poem
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Maple tree finally becomes wood, gets buried down in to
ground to be coal...it is coal that what Narendra Modi has
to think about which buried down in Mehsana district of
Gujarat. To reap the harvest he should have geologists, mining
engineers and to have them he should and must have
NATIONAL SCHOOL OF MINERAL RESOURCES in Gujarat
start thinking, planning and executing. Mineral Resources are
more or less neglected in Gujarat, Why Mineral Resources
in the Center did not do any thing when vast deposits of coal
are known to be there deep in earth of western India?
On fast track, he should think of bringing Arabean sea to
Ahmedabad, the center of Gujarat to serve India.
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after a boom downfall may be theory of economics but it shows feeling of nature n whole universe. then we must come on ultimate aim-BRAHMA SATYAM JAGANNAMITHYA..
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Changing mood of seasons..falling petal by petal.. and so the feelings of poet..prevailing words to give poem a move!
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No. Nature is impartial witness to your acts including what all are the going on inside you-
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Well crafted poem with apt images.Regards.
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Kudos, kudos and kudos.
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Seasonal moods!
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Soothing in its innate beauty---like the Maple tree! Nice externalization of thoughts through the cascading imagery.
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The autumnal feelings of your mind suddenly bloomed in the flowers drooping and falling on the grass....nature echoes the human mind never better....as in this poem
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A perfect picture of autumn and the feelings associated, and the assoicated lines, 'feelings.triggering the leaves' and 'sparked by the storm' highlight the same in your fluid compositon. Kudos, Sir.
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