Theme: Breeze

I Asked The Breeze

breeze1.jpg


I asked the breeze:
Let me know, please,
Why are you blowing,
And where are you going?


May I tag along
And hear your song,
See what you pursue,
See what you do?

Together we can run
And have some fun:
You can shake trees,
And I’ll follow you, breeze,

I asked the breeze:
Let me know, please,
Why are you blowing,
And where are you going?

I have no doubt
I’d love to be out
All day with you,
And explore something new.

I sit all day
In front of a computer display;
At the screen, I stare,
And dream of fresh air.

I asked the breeze:
Let me know, please,
Why are you blowing,
And where are you going?

Image © GETTY IMAGES

07-Mar-2013

More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1382     Comments: 9

Comments on this Poem

Comment
Beautiful, simple to comprehend, even by a child, and this theme is reflective of a very fertile imaginative ability. Thanks so much.

Anjana
04-Dec-2022 20:04 PM

Comment Rupradhaji & Padmaji, I am so glad you liked it.

Kulbir
13-Mar-2013 18:04 PM

Comment very soothing....your composition is such a delight!!

Rupradha
13-Mar-2013 15:33 PM

Comment Lovely and soothing...like the gentle breeze!

Padmaja Iyengar
09-Mar-2013 13:49 PM

Comment Jaipalji, my thanks for your appreciation!

kulbirbhalla
09-Mar-2013 12:36 PM

Comment A nice ode..from a true nature lover!

jaipal singh
09-Mar-2013 02:40 AM

Comment Rajan, My humble thanks for your appreciation.

kulbirbhalla
08-Mar-2013 12:04 PM

Comment Very soothing Kulbir.

. . . it's very tough to retain the simplicity, yet to bring forth the message. You've done so remarkably well :)!

Cheers

Rajan Roy
08-Mar-2013 08:52 AM

Comment Aparnaji, thanks for the nice photo.

kulbirbhalla
08-Mar-2013 07:55 AM


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