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Theme: Love |
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More Than Friends
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by Rupradha Mookerjee |
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Thought I would forget you,
It’s not that I didn’t try,
But my love for you is true,
No, it didn’t vanish or die.
You call me whatever you can,
It doesn’t matter anymore,
I know I am your woman,
Waiting forever at love’s shore.
You think it is easy to stay apart
The way I do now-a-days,
Well, you are etched in my every part,
For me this is the most difficult phase.
You’re my love, both first and last,
Today tomorrow and till time ends,
For it is only love, it is not lust,
Yes, we are more than friends! |
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10-May-2013 |
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Comments on this Poem
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thank you so much Kumarji & Jai ji
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Rupradhaji, for this one and other three short poems submitted simultaneously, I have a nice feeling as if a fresh air is blowing for good...please carry on with the spirit.
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Well composed poem, Rupa. Good theme, there is romance, there is pathos and hope, too.
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yeah, Kulbir ji, if we love someone, we have to accept the pain of love too..
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I am deeply touched by your support and appreciations Nathmal Ji. plz accept my earnest gratitude..
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Padmaja Ji, I am honored..plz accept my heartfelt thanks!!
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There's a price you pay for love, and it's with your heart!
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You choose a path of sacred love.A Hindustani girl loves someone first & last.So don't worry, if you didn't get returnth of love.You did your duty either he did or not.You are a true fellow in God's eyes .He will only take care of you.Soul lovers don't care worldly gains.We all have a great sympathy with you.The poem tells us some reality of life.A lot of thanks for nice emotions & step by step excellent combination of thoughts.Again thanks.
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Lovely! I felt as if I am reading Mirza Ghalib and I consider Urdu poetry the ultimate in beauty, pathos and wordplay.
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