Theme: Parting

Prey

When I woke up one fine dawn
And sat near your feet,
At once I knew you’re the one,
You make me complete!

Then when you opened your eyes,
And saw me staring at thee,
You could hear my heart’s cries,
And came closer and closer to me.

We were hardly an inch apart
Staring at one another,
It was a secret talk - heart to heart,
A unique love, like no other.

My voice was choked, throat dried,
I ran to the verandah right away,
Silently, covertly there I cried,
Not a single word could I say.

You came to ask me there
‘Hey, what happened?’
Into your eyes I couldn’t stare
As at that time my eyes rained.

I told you ‘leave me alone’,
You did that without arguing,
Helplessly I had to moan,
My feelings for you were brewing.

The moment you knew
How head over heels
I was in love with you;
Then you were also in thrills!

But our fate parted us,
You had to walk away,
Life became a circus,
And we became its prey!

14-May-2013

More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1484     Comments: 8

Comments on this Poem

Comment you can do better Jai ji..thanks a lot.. :)

rupradhamookerjee
19-May-2013 13:57 PM

Comment Very touching and true reflection of feelings! Not many people can do this..

jaipal singh
19-May-2013 02:58 AM

Comment thanks a bunch for so much support Padmaja ji..

rupradhamookerjee
16-May-2013 01:26 AM

Comment Touching! The longing, the heart break all that go with these, so very well articulated. Thanks for sharing Rupradha.

Padmaja Iyengar
15-May-2013 11:49 AM

Comment thanks for always motivating me Kulbir Ji, Nathmal Ji & Kumar Ji

rupradhamookerjee
15-May-2013 04:29 AM

Comment Your silent longing for love raises a storm in each heart, stay on dear, stay on dear, we shall never part... I love to hold on to you after reading this poem. LOvely composition!

Kumarendra Mallick
15-May-2013 00:00 AM

Comment You have described the reality of love consciousness here so beautifully that I shall give you hundred by hundred marks for good writing & expression. A lot of thanks.I feel very happy that you are continuously writing poetry.Again thanks.

Nathmal Sharma
14-May-2013 15:07 PM

Comment Heart-wrenching!

Kulbir
14-May-2013 14:57 PM


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