Theme: Wish

Last Wish

Once it was a two way thing,
Please don't deny,
Now it's a one way suffering,
You've left me to cry.

Yet I want a goodbye kiss
Just before I die,
But to keep my last wish
Will you ever fly?


More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1349     Comments: 9

Comments on this Poem

Comment thank you so much Jaipal ji, Padmaja ji, Kumarendra ji & Kingshuk ji. Your words mean a lot to me.

28-May-2013 11:43 AM

Comment So touching..........

28-May-2013 09:30 AM

Comment Rupa, your longing is far too deeper than the ocean, far too hotter than the fire and far too loftier than a mountain. Be sure, he shall turn up before you breathe your last and inject new life to reach every cell!

Kumarendra Mallick
28-May-2013 02:33 AM

Comment Ah! Lovely!

Padmaja Iyengar
28-May-2013 01:38 AM

Comment May you have a long life and many more wishes... accomplished too!

jaipal singh
28-May-2013 01:25 AM

Comment Kulbir ji:
Thanks a ton, that's so kind of you,
True friends like you are really few!

27-May-2013 22:42 PM

Comment Whatever you say
I'll do,
Any time, any day,
Especially for you!

27-May-2013 21:27 PM

Comment thanks a bunch BhaskarJi!

27-May-2013 12:21 PM

Comment very beautiful!!! excellent!!!

27-May-2013 12:10 PM

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