Theme: Oneness


Look into my heart,
Look into my mind
And you'll find
We aren't apart:
You're there,
In me flowing,
In me glowing,


More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1399     Comments: 6

Comments on this Poem

Comment Nathmalji,

Thank you so much for your appreciation - I am glad you liked it.

27-Jun-2013 16:28 PM

Comment Oneness & unity are great virtues and responsible for continuity of life.Unity
of minds,unity of thoughts,unity of work,unity of rhythm, unity of aim,unity of
correlations ,all are necessary to get success,progress & peace.Unity of harmony is also essential for various situations of life.You have depicted here the unity of both life partners' minds & hearts, which is responsible for
faithful ,as well as charming life.Without oneness life will be monotonous &
boring.Thank you very much for the unity of mind & heart for your life partner.Thank you for good thoughts.This unity may live for a long time.A lot of thanks again.

Nathmal Sharma
27-Jun-2013 14:53 PM

Comment Padmaja,
Thank you so much for your appreciation - I'll take another look!

23-Jun-2013 11:02 AM

Comment Wow! You've made a simple look appear so all pervading Kulbir. Thanks for sharing.

Padmaja Iyengar
23-Jun-2013 10:03 AM

Comment Rupradhaji,
My thanks for your wow!

23-Jun-2013 05:58 AM

Comment wow..

rupradha mookerjee
23-Jun-2013 00:45 AM

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