Theme: Longing

I Want To Be

I want to be drowned in the ocean of your eyes,
They show me the way to an unknown paradise,
I want to be lost in the forest of your thoughts,
The bonfire of my everlasting love speaks lots.

I want to be drenched in the drizzle of your words,
They seem to be like a prayer for the divine Lords,
I want to be soaked in the waterfall of your ardor,
Without the touch of your love, life is getting harder.

I want to be sun-bathed in the sunshine of your smiles,
Only to get just a glimpse for which I can travel miles.
I want to be saved in a small corner of your heart,
Without such a little safe haven, I am falling apart!


More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1013     Comments: 7

Comments on this Poem

Comment Jaipal ji & Madhavi ji, my heartfelt thanks for your constant support and appreciations..

29-Jul-2013 09:25 AM

Comment Rupradha jee , "I am falling apart" is an excellent expression and your poem is a nicer one!

26-Jul-2013 08:40 AM

Comment Liked this lovely poem with your natural flavour..

26-Jul-2013 03:40 AM

Comment I am so glad you liked it Padmaja ji, thanks a ton..

23-Jul-2013 00:36 AM

Comment Wow! Amazing wordplay and vivid images of love and longing skillfully painted Rupradha. Salutes.

Padmaja Iyengar
23-Jul-2013 00:21 AM

Comment I am so delighted you liked it Kumarji..

22-Jul-2013 13:39 PM

Comment What images you have used, Rupa, my dear friend. Your longing and romantic heart shall tear apart any heart. You have a strong pen.

Kumarendra Mallick
22-Jul-2013 04:24 AM

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