Theme: Longing

Me and my Plight

Day and night you are in my mind
I fail to understand the plight of this kind.
Consoling my heart not to be so involved
Unknowingly get trapped in tranquility
When your memories recall.

A foolish wish that you respond and talk
But you prefer to be silent
And disheartening me you mock.
I look for you in my dreams
But there too you are silent
Unaffected, insensitive, unconcerned being.

My voiceless sufferings
may not be understood by you
Then why do I desire
to be with you?
Under the pretext of work
you pretend to forget me
and here my restless heart desires to
be in the world of you and me.

Will wait for you
as worldly materialistic
pleasures will not give your soul delight

For sure someday you too will feel the pain
like me and understand my plight.

12-Aug-2013

More By  :  Mohini Gurav

Views: 1417     Comments: 36

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thanks Pradeep Nair for understanding the plight ...

Mohini Gurav
17-Oct-2013 22:45 PM

Comment The suffering of one, will hardly be understood by the partner..
that's the world and life around ..
I keep on wishing that she will understand me...
Will come back to me...

but never.....

It's the plight of a human being...
irrespective of the gender..

Loved it...

Pradeep S Nair
16-Oct-2013 14:50 PM

Comment Thanks Padmaja ji for appreciating the poem with motivational words . Thanks for your support . I will get back to you through email.
Thanks .

mohinigurav
05-Oct-2013 23:29 PM

Comment Longing and yearning so well and so poetically articulated! Kudos Mohiniji. If ok, pl mail me yours to my id padmaja_iyengar@yahoo.co.in

Padmaja Iyengar
03-Oct-2013 14:52 PM

Comment Thanks Mousumi Paul for your generous appreciation and kind words. Truely elavated and honoured. Thank You dear .

Mohini Gurav
18-Sep-2013 13:50 PM

Comment "under the pretext of work/ you pretend to forget me" truly touchy lines are those. kudos n hats off. many many congrats for dis budding poetess.

Mousumi Paul
18-Sep-2013 13:22 PM

Comment Thanks Prachi for your heartfelt comments. Truely motivated to write more. Thanks .

Mohini Gurav
02-Sep-2013 13:08 PM

Comment Thanks Jyoti for your generous comments . Glad to know that you liked my poem. Thanks dear .

Mohini Gurav
02-Sep-2013 13:04 PM

Comment this one is SUPERB. u talked a real womens heart out where she longs and desires for those little moments of attention and love. Loved it

prachi rajhans
26-Aug-2013 12:08 PM

Comment Simply gr8,! I ddnt know 'this' side of your personality! U r really a dark horse! kp up!

jyoti
26-Aug-2013 05:42 AM

Comment Thanks Sac for your generous comments. Feeling great and elated.
Motivated to write more. Thanks :)

Mohini Gurav
23-Aug-2013 04:56 AM

Comment Ah.. What should I say? I cant believe my friend is a poetess...that too of this worth...Good..

Sac
23-Aug-2013 01:49 AM

Comment Thanks Dr Sayantan Gupta ji for understanding the feel. Thanks for your compliments.

mohinigurav
22-Aug-2013 04:39 AM

Comment Lovely and touching

Sayantan Gupta
21-Aug-2013 23:11 PM

Comment Thanks Vinayak Kulkarni for your generous compliments for all my poems. Feeling great .

mohinigurav
19-Aug-2013 11:03 AM

Comment Thanks Betrothed for your compliments.

mohinigurav
19-Aug-2013 11:00 AM

Comment Beautiful poem!

betrothed
19-Aug-2013 04:47 AM

Comment Dear Rani I am very greatly honoured by your comments and happy to know that you understand my longing for someone and you have interpreted it so well. Yes its not only a poem My words are spontaneous flow of emotions that just gushed in my heart without my consent . Love is divine and unconditional . This intensity and platonic love will remain forever . Thanks for your generous comments and I am happy to know that you too feel the same for your loved ones the way I do. Love is life .Thanks once again dear Rani .

mohinigurav
18-Aug-2013 12:58 PM

Comment dear mohini
when i finished reading your LONGING, my eyes were brimming with
tears.it was like as though, you wrote it for me.
Dear, i dont know whether these feelings are expressed for some one
towards whom you feel very intensly. I, somehow,do not feel like dismissing it like o! its just a poem. these feelings are from the heart.... they are from spontaneous over flow of emotions.
S. I also feel the very same feelings but without EXPECTATIONS !

rani ullhas
18-Aug-2013 11:27 AM

Comment Thanks Moloy Bhattarcharya for your generous comments. Thanks for your support.

mohinigurav
18-Aug-2013 10:16 AM

Comment Dear Seema Ketkar you have interpreted it very appropriately . I am happy that you understood my different perspectives.Great your comments have truely elated me . Thanks a lot dear for your motivational comments.

mohinigurav
18-Aug-2013 10:13 AM

Comment very very intense and symbolic also. the one who fails to understand the plight and unables to see the suffering could be anyone from God to beloved or the dear one from friend to children/ parents.
Or it could be my own inner self.
silence is also communication.

Seema Ketkar
18-Aug-2013 03:06 AM

Comment very nice poem..........

MOLOY BHATTACHARYA
18-Aug-2013 01:13 AM

Comment Rupradha dear sailing in the same boat. Thanks for understanding me and my plight . Thanks for your comments and support :)

mohinigurav
16-Aug-2013 23:14 PM

Comment very intense..I too have a similar story..

rupradhamookerjee
16-Aug-2013 14:43 PM

Comment Thanks Jagdish Keshav ji for understanding the intense feelings in the poem . Thanks for your motivational support .

mohinigurav
16-Aug-2013 13:07 PM

Comment Very intense! One can feel the pain in your words, Mohini ji!...

Jagdish Keshav
16-Aug-2013 12:55 PM

Comment Nice One, I have read all the poems and all are really best.

Vinayak P. Kulkarni
16-Aug-2013 12:13 PM

Comment Thanks Uttam Guru for your motivating comments. I am so honoured by your comments. I am truely inspired to write more,Thanks for your support . Mohini

mohinigurav
16-Aug-2013 10:56 AM

Comment really nice.

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16-Aug-2013 05:16 AM

Comment Good heavens! I never knew you write poems! Thanks. The poem all seems to gush with so intensity that it takes the reader along in its stride. The broken rhyme scheme is just quite apt here for emphasizing the incalculable intensity that comes out in real life in broken verses, as in your lines,
My voiceless sufferings may not be understood by you Then why do I desire to be with you? Under the pretext of work you pretend to forget me and here my restless heart desires to be in the world of you and me. - See more at: http://www.boloji.com/index.cfm?md=Content&sd=Poem&PoemID=17075#.Ug0CeCZEYbE.gmail

Uttam Guru
16-Aug-2013 05:05 AM

Comment Thanks Raju Mote sir for your generous comments... Mohini

manya
16-Aug-2013 03:07 AM

Comment Nice poem

Mote R. V
16-Aug-2013 02:27 AM

Comment Great Nice

Raju Mote
16-Aug-2013 02:02 AM

Comment Thanks Dr S S Kanade sir for your modest interpretations. Yes truely optimistic in life.. Thanks for your kind support . Mohini.

manya
16-Aug-2013 01:46 AM

Comment It manifests the strong desire and optimistic attitude in life.

Dr S S kanade
15-Aug-2013 22:49 PM


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