Theme: Confession


Realisation suddenly dawned upon me
With the rising sun
Making me understand my folly of expecting
You to be with me and be one.
Love is Serene , Divine and Unconditional
Mine is more platonic and so very exceptional
Your silences speak louder than words
I do understand them with all
efforts and concerns.
Hope you forgive me for my selfish acts
For not understanding the realities
And the genuine facts.
Let my platonic love for you flourish
Will be cherished  in tranquility
Without any anguish.


More By  :  Mohini Gurav

Views: 1426     Comments: 28

Comments on this Poem

Comment Pradeep Nair Thanks .. You are right sometimes love can be possessive with serenity and divinity ..... being possessive is also one of the selfish acts and so realisation dawns ....

Mohini Gurav
17-Oct-2013 23:03 PM

Comment Love is Serene , Divine and Unconditional---> Is it really so?
Then why there comes the possessiveness?
i have experienced possessiveness along with serenity and divinity of love.

Just a question.. that's all..

But the concluding stanza really stand out...
for it is magnificent.

there is food for brain in each of your work.

Pradeep S Nair
16-Oct-2013 14:53 PM

Comment Thanks Padmaja ji for words of appreciation .

05-Oct-2013 22:02 PM

Comment Ah, love! What it can do to a person - well expressed! Great write, Mohiniji.

Padmaja Iyengar
03-Oct-2013 14:56 PM

Comment Thanks Prabhat Yadav for heartfelt comments.

Mohini Gurav
08-Sep-2013 13:22 PM

Comment While reading it, i got my surrounding as vaccum nd was hearing my heart-beat in a very obvious manner//great lines

Prabhat Yadav
08-Sep-2013 08:09 AM

Comment Thanks Saheli dear for your comments and for understanding the feelings .

28-Aug-2013 10:46 AM

Comment wonderfully wrapped with sensi
itve emotions

saheli kar
28-Aug-2013 09:50 AM

Comment Thanks Raju Mote sir for your compliments.

Mohini Gurav
24-Aug-2013 06:37 AM

Comment Best lines really good.....

Raju Mote
24-Aug-2013 01:57 AM

Comment Thanks Sachin for your compliments.

Mohini Gurav
23-Aug-2013 04:35 AM

Comment Really good. Simple and appealing...

23-Aug-2013 01:42 AM

Comment Thanks Shriranjan for your compliments.

Mohini Gurav
22-Aug-2013 10:09 AM

Comment good one

22-Aug-2013 06:36 AM

Comment Thanks Dr Sayantan Gupta ji for your generous comments. Yes your comments have motivated me to write more . Thanks.

22-Aug-2013 04:36 AM

Comment A good poem. Keep them coming.

Sayantan Gupta
21-Aug-2013 23:08 PM

Comment Thanks dear Mayurakshi for your compliments .Motivated to write more. Thank You.

21-Aug-2013 05:48 AM

Comment The poem has wordsworthian touch.nice mohini keep it up

20-Aug-2013 23:26 PM

Comment Thanks JS for your compliments. Extremely elated.

19-Aug-2013 05:13 AM

Comment Thanks Pradnya shete Pawar and Mr Inamdar for your generous comments. Motivated to write more. Thanks.

19-Aug-2013 05:04 AM

Comment Thanks Dr Kanade and Dr Madhav Raul for making me feel elated. Your comments really inspire me to write more. Heartfelt Thank You.

19-Aug-2013 05:00 AM

Comment your poem is very interesting and very attractive and impressive... very good..

19-Aug-2013 02:44 AM

Comment Best Lines Madam, Keep it up.

Dr Madhav Raul
19-Aug-2013 02:13 AM

Comment Your words are fully loaded with feeling and emotion.

Dr S S kanade
18-Aug-2013 13:31 PM

Comment Best lines.. made my evening so good..

Pradnya Shete Pawar
18-Aug-2013 12:48 PM

Comment Its elegant cadence is amazingly attractive! Keep it up!

18-Aug-2013 10:38 AM

Comment Thanks Rupradha for your encouraging and motivating comments.LOL.

18-Aug-2013 10:14 AM

Comment fantastic..

18-Aug-2013 09:15 AM

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