Theme: Love

When

When my eyes
Met your eyes,
Then our eyes
Established ties.

When my heart
Touched your heart,
Then our hearts
Played their parts.

When my soul
Merged with your soul,
Then our souls
Realized their goals.

28-Aug-2013

More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1392     Comments: 5

Comments on this Poem

Comment Padmaja and Nathmalji,

Thank you both for your loving appreciation.

kulbirbhalla
29-Aug-2013 15:50 PM

Comment You are always full of love with your "you".And it should remain forever.
Thank you for practical and realistic imagination.I think,you are masterpiece
in describing love situation as well as natural phenomena.A lot of thanks.

Nathmal Sharma
29-Aug-2013 15:30 PM

Comment A moing, soulful love poem that touches an instant chord. Thanks for sharing this lovely write Kulbir :-)

Padmaja Iyengar
28-Aug-2013 23:46 PM

Comment Rupradhaji,

Thank you so much for your heartwarming appreciation.

kulbirbhalla
28-Aug-2013 15:54 PM

Comment amazing..seems you are filled with love.. :) I really love your Love poems..

Rupradha
28-Aug-2013 14:15 PM


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