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Mobile Beauty
by Padmaja Iyengar - Paddy
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  Rewritten for Kulbir :-)

This cute beauty in a cotton dress well starched,
Looked at him with moving lips and head arched.
It was obvious she desired a serious tête-à-tête.
His heart too seemed to be on her all quite set.
Next, towards sunset, together they marched.


(This one's specially written as Kulbir wished my limerick 'Mobile Beauty' published on 14 Sept '13 had another ending.
Do read that one too :-))
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September 15, 2013
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Comment Thanks Ru and Kingshuk :-)

Padmaja Iyengar
09/16/2013 06:35 AM

Comment And then they watched the Sun rise.........

Very nice.....Padmaja!

kingshuk
09/16/2013 01:16 AM

Comment Thanks Kulbir :-) Hmmmm....
Thanks for your poetic feedback Seshuji :-)

Padmaja Iyengar
09/15/2013 23:38 PM

Comment wow..so sweet..

Rupradha
09/15/2013 22:25 PM

Comment cute thing lips pouted
head arched talking on phone
just a false pickup
:) Good limerick

Seshu Chamarty
09/15/2013 11:35 AM

Comment Padmaja,

Thanks for being so positive and romantic!

Now you can plan a sequel - their second date!

Kulbir
09/15/2013 11:29 AM




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