Theme: Relationship

Unburdening!

They say when relations are
Held too tight they die
But if left loose they fly.
No control over situations
Difficult to take any decision.
Why this dilemma and confusion?
 
I have contemplated and meditated
So have willingly opted to set you free
From bondage so you can soar high
I’m unburdening you from burdens
So you have no obligations
Don’t worry I am not at all saddened.
 
Happy to see you fly high
No reason to stop you
As you wished to go, but why?
I am always there for you
Whenever you feel dejected
And lonely and would like
To have a shoulder to unburden
You do come without reluctance
Don’t worry, sure you needn't justify.

02-Oct-2013

More By  :  Mohini Gurav

Views: 1411     Comments: 11

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thanks Pradeep Nair .. Unburden....Live and let live . depends on.. in what your happiness lies .. forcefully tied to or in setting free ..
Thanks for sharing your views...

Mohini Gurav
17-Oct-2013 13:51 PM

Comment I loved the Middle Stanza...

though, I think it is impossible..
to set something dearer free..without a tinge of sadness.

happy to see you fly high....

are you really happy? or am I really happy?

never it can be.... but ...
it may be possible...

I love this poem for it's realistic expressions..

Pradeep S Nair
16-Oct-2013 14:58 PM

Comment Thanks Raju Mote sir for liking the poem .Thanks for words of appreciation.

mohinigurav
04-Oct-2013 05:50 AM

Comment Great Poem I Like It

Raju Mote
04-Oct-2013 00:43 AM

Comment Thanks Pradnya dear and Bhaskar Jha sir for generous words of appreciation .

mohinigurav
03-Oct-2013 12:59 PM

Comment Wonderfully expressed !!! Really relations are if held too tight die away .But if left loose they happily fly on the wings of affinity and cordiality.Thanks for sharing such a nice poem dealing with relationships....:)

Bhaskar Jha
03-Oct-2013 09:33 AM

Comment Mam i just want to thank u for writing poems..
that's all i can say..

All words are emotionally practical..
and every poem i fell is so different and .. i feel its the part of every ones life..

:)

Pradnya Shete Pawar
03-Oct-2013 08:35 AM

Comment Thanks Padmaja ji for reminding me this emotional song sung by Mukesh which is my favourite too. Thanks for sharing your views.

mohinigurav
03-Oct-2013 07:55 AM

Comment I can't put my finger to it, but this poem unco9nsciously reminded me of an old Mukesh song from the Manoj Kumar starrer 'Purab Paschim' - Koi jab tumharta hriday tod de, tadapat hua tumhe chod de...tab tum mere paas aana priye...

Thanks for sharing this well written, insightful poem. Mohiniji. If you feel like, do read my articvle published here on the 1st.:

http://www.boloji.com/index.cfm?md=Content&sd=Articles&ArticleID=15027

Padmaja Iyengar
03-Oct-2013 05:51 AM

Comment Thanks Kulbir .. and yes I liked your interpretations .. so true when you unburden someone you too become unburdened so the freedom you give is the freedom you get ! Thanks for sharing your views .

mohinigurav
03-Oct-2013 05:10 AM

Comment Mohiniji,

Thanks for sharing.

The freedom you give
Is the freedom you get!

Kulbir
02-Oct-2013 18:00 PM


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