With You

by Dr. Madhavi Godavarthy

Along the winding road
Of life you might move on
And away my friend
Leaving behind my ‘self’
But a part of my soul
Travels with you!

01-Mar-2014

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Comments on this Poem

It is effect of this era that we have to work even parting.It may be due to money making.But burning desire of love and respect for partner should not be
decreased.You depicted it very well here with your full of enthusiasm.Nice emotions.Heart touching output. A lot of thanks Mam.

Nathmal Sharma
16-Mar-2014 11:52 AM

Oh, the agony and ecstacy of love and parting...very well expressed!

Padmaja Iyengar
01-Mar-2014 23:06 PM

Thank you Sivamadhaviyam and Ms Rupradha.

Madhavi
01-Mar-2014 06:09 AM

Great one...
But that place in the soul is reserved and is occupied by the one who is its inherent part.
But what you wrote might be true : still there will be some of them for which we find some additional temporary space that would be of course be tenants only...
For such your imagery and presentation is great.

sivamadhaviyam
01-Mar-2014 05:03 AM

too good..

Rupradha
01-Mar-2014 04:46 AM