Theme: Love

Re-Creation

by Supratik Sen
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Come let us find a new world,
A land, where we plough our thoughts,
Trees that carry our breaths,
A seed that wills on the sand,
Just at the drop of a hat.

Come let us build a new world,
Where rivers border the fields, not our hearts,
Mountains stand to give, not to guard,
A bird that sails on the sky,
Without reason this or that.

Come let us create a new world,
That helps the blood to air the Source,
With a mind that means to mend,
Goes distance to see no end,
Lands on us, shows what was there,
World in its place loving as it were!
Image © Supratik Sen

31-Mar-2014

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Comments on this Poem

Comment Thank you Mr. Nathmal Sharma for your comments.

supratik
29-Apr-2014 01:02 AM

Comment Good ambition.Good creation.A lot of thanks Sir.

Nathmal Sharma MertaCity
26-Apr-2014 21:43 PM

Comment Thank you Padmaja for your kind words! It's so heartening to see how well you have internalised the content of the poem!

supratik
02-Apr-2014 02:06 AM

Comment Much liked the refrain "Come let us...new world" filled in with the words "find", "build" and "Create" at the beginning of each stanza,,,And yes, freedom..so beautifully expressed wih great wordplay and a superb visual! What a wonderful wordsmith you are, Supratik! Respects.

Padmaja Iyengar
01-Apr-2014 07:41 AM


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