Theme: Love



Come let us find a new world,
A land, where we plough our thoughts,
Trees that carry our breaths,
A seed that wills on the sand,
Just at the drop of a hat.

Come let us build a new world,
Where rivers border the fields, not our hearts,
Mountains stand to give, not to guard,
A bird that sails on the sky,
Without reason this or that.

Come let us create a new world,
That helps the blood to air the Source,
With a mind that means to mend,
Goes distance to see no end,
Lands on us, shows what was there,
World in its place loving as it were!
Image © Supratik Sen


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Comments on this Poem

Comment Thank you Mr. Nathmal Sharma for your comments.

29-Apr-2014 01:02 AM

Comment Good ambition.Good creation.A lot of thanks Sir.

Nathmal Sharma MertaCity
26-Apr-2014 21:43 PM

Comment Thank you Padmaja for your kind words! It's so heartening to see how well you have internalised the content of the poem!

02-Apr-2014 02:06 AM

Comment Much liked the refrain "Come let world" filled in with the words "find", "build" and "Create" at the beginning of each stanza,,,And yes, beautifully expressed wih great wordplay and a superb visual! What a wonderful wordsmith you are, Supratik! Respects.

Padmaja Iyengar
01-Apr-2014 07:41 AM

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