Theme: Innocence

Child's Moon

The child
Woke up at dawn
Cried to find
The moon in the window
Lost!

01-Apr-2014

More By  : Dr. Madhavi Godavarthy

Views: 1369     Comments: 7

Comments on this Poem

Comment The child woke up at dawn,cried to find the moon in the window,but lost it.He returned to his mother ,for
she was a great and true moon of his world and he could embrace her whenever he wanted.Mother's Day is near on 11th May.Wish you a happy Mother's Day ! Wish you write a poem on mother to gift her on this occation.A lot of thanks Mam.Thank you very much.

Nathmal Sharma
07-May-2014 07:09 AM

Comment wow, lovely..

Rupradha
06-Apr-2014 09:00 AM

Comment Thank you all for liking this little poem!

Madhavi
03-Apr-2014 15:34 PM

Comment Nice expression of innocence.A lot of thanks.

Nathmal Sharma
03-Apr-2014 05:15 AM

Comment very sweet...

swatantra
02-Apr-2014 02:47 AM

Comment Lovely!

Kingshuk
02-Apr-2014 01:38 AM

Comment A child's innocence superbly captured! Well done, Madhavi!

Padmaja Iyengar
01-Apr-2014 23:10 PM


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