Theme: Attraction

Dying For You!

Our eyes contacted,
And sparks flew;
I was impacted:
I'm dying for you!


More By  :  Kulbir Bhalla

Views: 1406     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment mind blowing!

20-Jun-2014 01:44 AM

Comment Padmaja and Nathmalji,

I am glad you liked it - I was wondering whether to submit it or not.

19-Jun-2014 11:12 AM

Comment It shows your "Deewanapan" (insanity) of love.All the persons like me,can't write love poems well.Only and only man as you,may write and express their views
so successfully and with boldness that we always amaze to read these beautiful pieces of poetry.Tons
of thanks Kulbir Ji.

Nathmal Sharma MertaCity
19-Jun-2014 10:37 AM

Comment Wow! What a love ignition! Good one, Kulbir!

Padmaja Iyengar
19-Jun-2014 08:28 AM

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