Sundial

by Dr. Kumarendra Mallick

sundial --
time leaves footsteps
of shadow

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Comments on this Poem

Thank you, Padmaja. I feel happy to get your candid view. Thank you once again to support my efforts.

kumarendramallick
11-Jul-2014 09:35 AM

Thank you, Rupa. I shall keep the poem unchanged and wait for your arrival!!

kumarendramallick
11-Jul-2014 09:33 AM

Great concept and visualization!

Padmaja Iyengar
11-Jul-2014 04:27 AM

no, I think 'of shadow' is nice.. :) thank you..

Rupradha
11-Jul-2014 03:43 AM

Rupa, tell me if I should change to 'on shadow' as Line 3. Thank you, I shall wait for you, dear friend.

kumarendramallick
10-Jul-2014 11:33 AM

wonderful..

Rupradha
10-Jul-2014 10:34 AM