Theme: Anguish


She’s being so much ignored
That a part of her is dying;
Seeking liberty from Lord
Relentlessly she’s crying!


More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1395     Comments: 10

Comments on this Poem

Comment excellent lines Nathmal ji, thank you so much..

03-Aug-2014 15:18 PM

Comment "Seeking liberty from Lord,she should keep patience & quiet.
There is delay but no darkness, His decision is always right.
We can't get anything more than our fate & before fixed time.
Even though someone may intensely beg,cry or softly rhyme.
Oneday she would be certainly noticed,so she would be quiet.
A lot mercy will bless upon her,for she is pure hearted & white.

Nathmal Sharma
22-Jul-2014 14:48 PM

Comment Mohini ji, thank you so much!! :)

22-Jul-2014 10:36 AM

Comment Rupradha Dear ...heartfelt lines ...loved the response given by Kulbir ..fantastic .....stay serene ...difficult though ..
Rupradha keep it up !

Mohini Gurav
22-Jul-2014 10:21 AM

Comment thanks a bunch Paddy, yes I loved Kulbir ji's lines too..

16-Jul-2014 04:39 AM

Comment A poignant write, Ru. Much liked Kulbir's poetic feedback too.

Padmaja Iyengar
15-Jul-2014 22:45 PM

Comment thanks Prof!

15-Jul-2014 01:02 AM

Comment Wow..wonderful !!

truth seeker
14-Jul-2014 23:49 PM

Comment lovely lines Kulbir ji, thanks..

14-Jul-2014 10:08 AM

Comment Rupradhaji,

Whatever they do,
Whatwever their act,
It's up to you
How you react.

Behold the drama,
Behold the scene,
But be a lama:
Stay serene!

14-Jul-2014 07:46 AM

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