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Theme: Love |
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True Love Tests
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by Bhaskaranand Jha Bhaskar |
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Love meets and ignites
Two sweet hearts
And unites them.
After they're united together
Through and through
The body, mind and soul,
It sneaks out
From their usual hobnobs,
It has a perch
On their life's Tree
To watch and test
Their loyalty to each other
To be declared
A real winner or a loser
In the final hours of eventful life. |
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22-Aug-2014 |
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Comments on this Poem
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" Very deep and minute expression . . .The word "ignites" represents here true love that always remains the reason of two lovers' meeting. And the line "through and through body mind and soul" symbolizes their mental moral and spiritual supports for each other as a vow through out their lives. " it has a perch . . . Tree" focuses on the important place of true love in life though which they know each other completely. But the concluding line shows that the poem has an end in wisdom. . . Superb. . ."
Originally commented by Durga Patva.
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Very true love has to go through many tests ...a winner or a loser..nice lines ..well expressed sir as always ..
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very well-written..
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