Theme: Longing

Awaiting Patiently

You call me an impatient being.
I too sometimes wonder whether the
Situations make me so impatient or
It's just a transference to me from genes.
 
You are free to keep changing your
Fragile mindset that makes me
emotionally quite upset.
Why do I unnecessary fret?
So easily I get drifted away from my
Goals which are so meticulously by me set.
 
Learning from you to be patient enough.
Waiting patiently for the right moments
To arrive and pleasantly knock.
Till then will have control over my
emotions and drives.
Hope you don’t test my patience
For too long and willingly you soon arrive.

23-Aug-2014

More By  :  Mohini Gurav

Views: 1448     Comments: 8

Comments on this Poem

Comment Nice poem!

Minakshi
01-Jan-2015 23:20 PM

Comment Thanks Gopal Lahiri Sir for your motivational words of appreciation . It means a lot to me . Thanks . Regards . Best wishes .

Mohini Gurav
30-Aug-2014 09:19 AM

Comment So much truth in this write. A thoughtful and crafty poem.
Liked a lot. Keep it up, Mohini.

gopal
29-Aug-2014 10:59 AM

Comment Thanks Nathmal Sharma ji for your suggestions and interpretations ..Means a lot to me .Thanks.

Mohini Gurav
26-Aug-2014 11:00 AM

Comment Patience is needed in every work of life.Here you have realized it to your partner or friend in such a beautiful manner that he will aware of it.Thanks a
a lot, Mohini ji.

Nathmal Sharma
26-Aug-2014 09:57 AM

Comment Thanks Bhaskarja sir and Kulbir ji for words of appreciation . Means a lot to me . Thanks .

Mohini Gurav
24-Aug-2014 09:25 AM

Comment outstanding piece..!!!" Waiting patiently for the right moments" is all that need to realize .. truly written!!!

bhaskaranandjhabhaskar
23-Aug-2014 11:05 AM

Comment Mohiniji,

Thanks for sharing - I will work on my patience!

Kulbir
23-Aug-2014 07:47 AM


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