Theme: Hope



You’re immune to my love, being quiet and still,
You’ve become unresponsive to what I feel,
You give me incessant tears of ruthless pain,
You probably don’t want to see me again!

Yet I’m alive hoping that you’ll come back to me,
What my heart holds for you, someday you’ll see,
Life will no longer be a painful journey, or a trouble,
All my melancholies will vanish like a mere bubble!
Image © Sunny Chatterjee


More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1322     Comments: 15

Comments on this Poem

Comment thanks a lot Nathmal ji.. :)

rupradha mookerjee
09-Sep-2014 02:57 AM

Comment A good phenomena of your true love has appeared here so nicely. When there is a hope,there is a way. Thanks a lot Rupradha Ji.

Nathmal Sharma
07-Sep-2014 13:36 PM

Comment thank you.. :)

07-Sep-2014 12:29 PM

Comment I liked it.

07-Sep-2014 12:02 PM

Comment thanks a lot Jai ji, well nothing like a new avatar, it's just that my friends call me Rupz..

07-Sep-2014 06:43 AM

Comment A nice poem on so predictable themes of yours'.
So Rupradhaji, you have appeared in a new avatar 'Rupz' so difficult for a person like me to decipher things.

06-Sep-2014 07:02 AM

Comment thanks a bunch Prof!

04-Sep-2014 14:25 PM

Comment so beautiful an idea you have knitted in such a short poem. you deserve congrats. .

truth seeker
04-Sep-2014 11:52 AM

Comment thanks a lot Kumar ji..

04-Sep-2014 04:40 AM

Comment Yes these must... a day shall arrive when you open the door the spring shall step in!

Kumarendra Mallick
03-Sep-2014 22:50 PM

Comment thanks a lot Bhaskar ji..

03-Sep-2014 22:14 PM

Comment After a long span of time I read your poem, very beautiful, full of hope !! Thanks

Bhaskar Jha
03-Sep-2014 13:50 PM

Comment thanks a lot Kingshuk ji & Kulbir ji..

03-Sep-2014 12:25 PM

Comment Well expressed - hope is what keeps us going.

03-Sep-2014 11:24 AM

Comment Yearning showers in your well expressed!

03-Sep-2014 10:23 AM

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