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Wonderful Feel...

by Mohini Gurav

My smile has too many secrets to reveal
Your looking at me was a wonderful feel!
Lost my heart in your memories so deep like sea of water
Why does my mind remembering you, falter??

Why waiting for you is such a great pleasure??
Even though you said we are not going to meet forever
And still I get into the water with all the courage gathered.
I know there is possibility of drowning rather.

Hope you will come and rescue me
And lend your hand to save me further.
I believe that you will surely come.
Waiting for you to shower your kind favour
And I wish to fearlessly surrender.

15-Feb-2015

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Comments on this Poem

Welcome, My Dear

alwaysaparna
16-Feb-2015 12:38 PM

Thanks Aparna Ma'am for the wonderful pic ...: )

Mohini Gurav
16-Feb-2015 06:40 AM

True expression of undying and selfless love.

jkmanojelt
16-Feb-2015 06:37 AM

Thanks a lot Nathmal Sharma , Kulbir ji and Bhaskarnand Jha ! Thanks for your words of appreciation !

Mohini Gurav
16-Feb-2015 06:35 AM

Wow! What a wonderful feel..! awesome piece!

Bhaskaranand Jha Bhaskar
15-Feb-2015 23:47 PM

Mohiniji,

Thanks for sharing.

Kulbir
15-Feb-2015 20:18 PM

A Good gift peace of poetry on Valentine's day Mohini Ji.Thanks a lot.

Nathmal Sharma
15-Feb-2015 18:54 PM