Theme: Night

Cage

dark cage --
the chirrup of sunshine
escapes

08-Dec-2016

More By  : Dr. Kumarendra Mallick

Views: 1422     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thank you, Bijay babu for drawing a striking parallel.

kumarendramallick
09-Dec-2016 10:07 AM

Comment After the chirrup, all the sparrows flown away, as after dazzling the light retreats taking to the chariot of the Konark sun temple.

bijay kant dubey
08-Dec-2016 22:45 PM

Comment Your response has the spark of a poem. Thank you for your positive and interesting feedback, Bijay babu.

kumarendramallick
08-Dec-2016 11:50 AM

Comment The Big Bang theory
The sun flashing with the dawn break and light dazzling, but with the twilight glowing and beginning to retreat fro the dusk, enveloping with darkness opaque and invisible with the shadows following as genii, ghosts and goblins haunting, but the tantricas experimenting with the nocturnal, but should handle with logic and mental balance.

bijay kant dubey
08-Dec-2016 11:02 AM


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