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A Journey Through Paradise

While standing near a stream one morning,
I gazed up at the pristine blue endless sky
It swung round above me,
As though pleasantly greeting me "Hi"!

The stream murmured a heavenly music,
As though offering me a treat
I felt my heart just skip a beat,
My lips say, "Oh My"!

I shifted my gaze to the mighty mountain peaks,
That cradled the beautiful sky
Armies of deodars marched over the mountain cheeks,
As though saying, "We'll live forever, never die"!

My eyes moved on to the foamy clouds,
Few broken up, some scattered
Clad in white, Oh! They looked so proud,
But the naughty zephyr soon had them shattered!

The intoxicating smell of the white lilies blooming,
Put me in a trance
They seemed a sweet tune to be humming,
That made me want to dance!

These cosmos flowers, so fresh, innocent and clean,
Were just kissed by the sun
Oh! From this ultra-special land of paradise,
I'd never want to run!

23-Sep-2001

More By  :  Charishma Ramchandani

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Comments on this Poem

Comment Diversion in Creative Beauty Leads All to Paradise!

Creating things of beauty brings joy quite unique in the life of one;
If that are helpful and useful in the world, one becomes great;
Such things artistic mind with deep interest in aestheticism do ever;
In this world of anxiety, indulgence in art surely gives great relief!

Even if one is not an artist but can convey ideas, one can create literature;
For that, if one is interested in musing in Nature, certainly one can do so;
But basically love of beauty in art or Nature, automatically makes one creative;
Creation of art work or literary works makes one certainly great ever!

Anxiety of heart in the bad incidences of world needs diversion;
Art and Nature are great relief and diversion towards creativity beautiful;
Gaining one's self so, one can walk straight to glory by achievements nice;
In life what looks to be impossible to surmount becomes nothing too!

Men have crossed many hardships by diversions in creating beautiful things
By minds of art and love of Nature in this world of paradise incomparable!


T A Ramesh
29-Sep-2021 11:52 AM


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