Theme: Relationship

The End

The savor of fruits
still remains
in my mouth,
but the bitterness of words
demolishes the clouds
and wrings the snow
counting the pebbles.
But you never told me
why you deceived me,
why with pain
and injustice did you desire
to say that the end
always in tears
is cast to flames.

The End1.jpg


More By  :  Dimitris P. Kraniotis

Views: 1350     Comments: 7

Comments on this Poem

Comment Can you explain central idea of your poem The End

Sampada Mayekar
22-Oct-2020 09:24 AM

Comment Poetry is our own mistress .

Giorgio Bolla
21-Jul-2011 12:00 PM

Comment Beautiful piece with a wild wish of betrayal and pain... I love the imagery. Thanks for sharing Dimitris...

Michael Kwaku Kesse Somuah (Ghana)
20-Jul-2011 12:49 PM

Very nice, very interesting. Congratulations, Dimitris !

Niculina Oprea

Niculina Oprea
20-Jul-2011 12:45 PM

Comment Dimitris,

I like you poem very much.

regards, art

20-Jul-2011 11:31 AM

Comment What tremendous pain and suffering is crossing this poem in witch nevertheless hope must remain in those tears coming close to flames.
Thanks Dimitris of share the fine feelings of this poem

ximena gautier greve
19-Jul-2011 17:33 PM

Comment what a wonderful poem

19-Jul-2011 15:59 PM

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