Theme: Friendship

It's You

It’s you who light up my trail
Filling it with never-ending fervor
And let my parched heart set sail
To its perfect destiny— your harbor.
 
It’s you who will make my soul fragranced
Letting it smell like the freshly bloomed rose
In your touch the greatest comfort I have sensed,
Come back again and hold me close.
 
It’s you who inspires me to love myself,
As you discover the best of me and show,
How can I forget your unconditional help
And support that makes my integrity glow.
 
It’s you who brings a smile on my face
When I am in the saddest frame of mind,
Your position, my dear, no one can ever replace.
Tell me where a better friend can I find?
 
It’s you who understands when I hide my tears
Behind the camouflage of my forged smile,
You take away my meaningless fears
When I get tensed, even for a while.
 
It's you who adorns my paths with flowers
Offering me the best of friendship forever
Making me feel the joy of seasonal June showers
As out of endless ecstasy I waver!
 
It’s you who makes me a complete woman.
I am sure I will dream you again tonight.
In the monsoon evenings you will run
And come back to me forgetting the petty fight!
 

20-Jan-2011

More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1490     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment Am glad you liked it Ravinder Sir! Thanks a lot!

rupradhamookerjee
23-Jan-2011 03:56 AM

Comment How wonderfully you concluded Sir! Thank you so much!

rupradhamookerjee
23-Jan-2011 03:55 AM

Comment Now that is soothing and touches the chords of the heart. Well done

Ravinder Malhotra
22-Jan-2011 17:09 PM

Comment It’s you who makes me a complete woman.
I am sure I will dream you again tonight.
In the monsoon evenings you will run
And come back to me forgetting the petty fight!

First two lines are too good... I shall conclude in the following manner:

In the high wind of monsoon desires
you shall fly back to me forgetting the small fight...

The entire poem is deeply romantic. I loved each line. Thank you.

kumarendramallick
22-Jan-2011 09:21 AM


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