Theme: Nostalgia

I miss my Comfort Zone

Raise your ear to my heart,
You will hear the ocean rattling within
The tides wants to untie the knots and roar free...
Water of Emotions are turning unruly with the rising of moon,
There is only this moon and not my man...
Oh..how I love this moon and you, my man...
You are my comfort zone...
I can bang on you whenever I feel low,
I can burst my fire, I can freeze my fantasies,
I can shower my affection, I can drop my tears,
I can laugh my heart out, I can cry my soul out,
I can talk my thoughts to you, I can quarrel and be calm...
I can demand all the love, I can dominate the attention...
I can be myself and I can be you too...
What a comfort I have..when I am with you!!
But where are you?
My comfort zone...
I miss being comfortable
I miss being loved..

17-Mar-2011

More By  :  Mita Sharma

Views: 1430     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment beautifully woven

Shrey
18-Mar-2011 13:59 PM

Comment Heart warming

Treasure
18-Mar-2011 13:57 PM

Comment Thanks for pointing it out sir, its exactly what you thought..it's bank on you.....thanks again..!

mita
18-Mar-2011 00:54 AM

Comment I wonder if it is a typographical error..." I can 'bang' on you whenever I feel low" ? Or do you mean 'bank' on you ? The two can have entirely different meanings !!!!

Ravinder Malhotra
17-Mar-2011 23:35 PM


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