Theme: Love

What if I ?

What if I say “You are the one,
The ‘dream man’, the ‘special someone’,
Who I had been waiting for so long,
In loving you there’s nothing wrong!”
What if I believe that love has no rules,
With a heart’s joy and peace it spools,
It ignores the silly fences of age,
It forgets petty fights, egos and rage!
What if I confess to you my soul’s whisper,
And tell you, “You are my life’s evening star,
And life is meaningless without you, my dear,”
Will you be mine crossing every barrier?

27-Mar-2011

More By  :  Rupradha Mookerjee

Views: 1428     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment @Seema Banerjee: Thank you. :-)

rupradhamookerjee
29-Mar-2011 14:51 PM

Comment I liked the poem .. wonderful

Seema Banerjee
28-Mar-2011 20:22 PM

Comment Thanks a lot Sir.. :) Your words inspire me a lot!!

rupradhamookerjee
28-Mar-2011 07:16 AM

Comment Very romantic theme, and 'the whisper' is too sweet! I like the lines below:
It ignores the silly fences of age,
It forgets petty fights, egos and rage!
However, in second line I prefer to replace 'forgets' by 'buries'. Rupradha, shall you prefer an evening star to morning star! I liked the poem. Love.

kumarendramallick
28-Mar-2011 05:01 AM


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