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Theme: Love |
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If I Say
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by Dr. Kumarendra Mallick |
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If I say, 'I love you,
what will be your reply,
will you blush
or will you spill a smile?'
If I say, 'Give me a kiss,
what will be your reply?
Eyes closed will you close in
or feel shy and blow one from a mile?'
If I ask, 'Fill up the blanks...
what will be your script?
Will you make me 'spellbound' -
sans any blanks between our hearts
Love is the fin in the sea
and feather in the sky,
heart's rapid breath
and lover's fervent tearful eye... |
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07-Apr-2011 |
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Comments on this Poem
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Thank you, Amit for your candsid words.
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This poem is fantastic... I loved it.
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Rupradha, you have, in fact, made me spellbound by removing the blank spaces. Thank you for your inspiring words.
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I am spellbound! Your writing is awesome!!
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