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Theme: Love |
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Look Into My Eyes
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by Rupradha Mookerjee |
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Look into my eyes, you will know
How they’re radiant in love’s glow,
How I yearn to be in your arms,
How am bowled over by your charms.
Look into my eyes, you will see
How they’re on a giving spree,
How they want to make you glad,
How I crave for you, my lad.
Look into my eyes, you will find
How they depict the crux of my mind,
How they portray my feelings for you,
How much I want to say “I love you too”.
Look into my eyes, you will feel
How sans you their value is nil,
How they’re elated to see your face,
How without you my life is a mess. |
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18-Apr-2011 |
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Comments on this Poem
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good answer on behalf of him..thanks Kulbir ji..
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Rupradhaji,
I'm looking,
And what do I see?
Love is cooking,
All for me!
Thanks!
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thanks a lot Nathmal ji..
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Radha knows love,but Rupradha knows love and griefs both.Eyes are true mirror of a heart which you have depicted beautifully in this poem.Thank you very much.
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@bharat b trivedi: Thanks a ton Sir. Eagerly awaiting your similar composition.. :-)
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Rupradha,
Excellent write! It reminded me of one of my similar compositions, which I'll post very soon. Look out for 'In the mirror of your Eyes'...
God Bless!
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your comment, explanation, assurance means a lot Sir! Thanks a bunch..
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Your composition has passion, has love, has affection and has longing for the one you are so anxiously waiting for. Your pining is loud and clear, and just wait, you shall a chance to say 'I love you, too.' Loved your sweet composition.
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