Theme: Sentimentality

Troubling Emotions

Honey I feel so low.....
so grounded n bereft of everything.....
I seem far away from the vibracious life....
settled in the subberbs of coldness.....
dirth n anxiety all around....
Madness in my heart n craziness in emotions....
How restless do I feel....
Growing up seems of no use......
A childish stubborness hs crept in,
Longing to get my wishes fullfilled....
How I wish to make things lighter n pleasant for myself....
Baby, I need some rest,
Help me escape the tiredness out of my mind.....
The searching soul within me longs for peace....
Give me that peace...that maturity....that sense of belongingness......
Help me to make an attempt to join the crowd....
Awaken me from such a nightmare....
Baby I feel grounded, low n bereft....
Help me to find my soul..... 
   

29-May-2011

More By  :  Shruti Agarwal

Views: 1388     Comments: 9

Comments on this Poem

Comment thank u all for ur ackowlegements.....
deepak : motivation are my feelings...

global
09-Jun-2011 08:14 AM

Comment just osum....all praises fr u...just a question.....since d emotions are so deep....from where did u get d motivation...

deepak
07-Jun-2011 07:41 AM

Comment the poem expressed genuine feelings... keep it up Shruti...

Anindita Bose
02-Jun-2011 08:14 AM

Comment waah!!!

yuvraj
02-Jun-2011 03:56 AM

Comment hey shruti....its awesome........!!! i cant beleive its done by u .... ;-)....!!! well done.....!!! keep writin........

ankit dua
01-Jun-2011 13:10 PM

Comment Hey awesome lines so true and touching :) keep writing

Tuhina Dey
01-Jun-2011 08:03 AM

Comment beautiful...

ankita gulati
01-Jun-2011 07:44 AM

Comment Coollllllllll dear way to gooooooo..............

Vartika Rai
01-Jun-2011 07:37 AM

Comment I request the viewers to please post in their comments and help me improve on my write-ups....thank you all....

global
01-Jun-2011 05:53 AM


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