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Theme: Love |
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But When...
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by Rupradha Mookerjee |
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When I delve into the harsh realities of life
I know it’s tough to go through such strife!
But when I close my eyes and see your face
The world seems a wonderland, full of grace!
When I walk through the roads full of thorns
I see people mocking, I sense their scorns!
But when your thoughts overflow my mind
Instead of thorns on my way, rose petals I find!
When I sail alone into the vast sea of reality
The gigantic earth shows me my triviality!
But when I look at myself through your eyes,
I feel my magnitude, my beauty, to my surprise!
When I face the tornados of the unkind humanity
Am dumbfounded by people’s meaningless vanity!
But when I think about your egoless humble heart
It makes every single moment of my life worth! |
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06-Feb-2011 |
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Comments on this Poem
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Thanks a lot bro (Karthickraj s) and Ravinder Ji for your appreciations which will inspire me in future!!
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As Kumarendra has remarked "Very sweetly scripted"; you are taking tiny steps of progression towards mature writing. All the best.
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Di, nice poem with hidden meanings which are true in today's world.
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation Sir! It means a lot to me!
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This poem, Rupradha has different layers of interpretation: to a lover or to Him, the dual meanings so common in Tagore's poems! I love to read your composition. Very sweetly scripted.
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