Theme: Haiku

Walking - A Haiku


Did they leave too soon,
Or, are they yet to arrive?
Pondered I, walking ...

Image © Dipankar Dasgupta


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Comments on this Poem

Comment @ Sharbaniranjan Kundu

I thank you for you kind comment. I have been trying to write haikus for a while. I would be happier though if I didn't need the photographs to make the haikus make sense. As far as I can understand, a haiku itself should be have a photographic quality. But it is not easy to reach that level of perfection. Thanks again.

30-Aug-2011 10:24 AM

Comment I have liked your three haikus. They are very effective because of the accompanying photographs.

Sharbaaniranjan Kundu
30-Aug-2011 03:51 AM

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