Theme: Mother

I Miss you, Mom

I am alone in crowd
I am sleepless in night 
every path appears wrong to me
and you are not here, my Mom, 
to tell me what's right.
 
I feel lost in this huge world 
I feel like I am broken inside 
distress hits me repeatedly 
like a rock is hit by tide 
and you are not here to encourage me 
then how can I fight?
 
I am unable to see my destination 
it's so dark outside. 
it's so dark as I can't see anything, 
it's darker than the blackest night. 
and you are not here, my mom, 
to show me the light.
 

13-Nov-2011

More By  :  Vikram Srivastava

Views: 1384     Comments: 4

Comments on this Poem

Comment Great poem. I'm sorry that you lost your mother. I know what you're going through. I lost my mom last March and I feel lost also. Your mother would be proud of your poem.

randyjohnson
16-Jan-2014 15:02 PM

Comment This is touches hearts.....Beautiful writing....:)

mitul
18-Nov-2011 04:48 AM

Comment without help of mother can't do anything
i am very miss u mom

vaibhav tripathi
17-Nov-2011 00:38 AM

Comment I share your deep feeling, Vikram. The world is full with one person and so very empty in her absence. Thank you for your very emotive poem,

kumarendramallick
14-Nov-2011 12:43 PM


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