Theme: Waiting

I am Waiting

You didn't say goodbye,
while leaving
and I was standing there,
crying n bleeding....

What was my mistake,
my fault or sin
only dream of you,
that was I dreaming?

You left me alone,
absolutely forlorn
this is the day,
I was always dreading...

And I remained there,
crying n bleeding...
I wanted to stop you,
and call your name,

but my voice was choked, 
and I was damn lame...
I couldn't follow your trail,
the path you were leading
 
and I'm still here
crying, bleeding & waiting.....
and I will be here
waiting, waiting  & waiting.
 

17-Nov-2011

More By  :  Vikram Srivastava

Views: 1375     Comments: 3

Comments on this Poem

Comment Thanx Rupradha.....Thanx suraj....:)

aarambhan
19-Nov-2011 11:00 AM

Comment very touchy!!

Rupradha
18-Nov-2011 10:58 AM

Comment What was my mistake,
my fault or sin
only dream of you,
that was I dreaming?

nice expression of thoughts.....

suraj tiwari
18-Nov-2011 07:58 AM


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